The Lie

Such a little thing Strung between two hearts Concealed in silence That which is unknown cannot hurt Not both at least Just one heart stricken It will not stay silent It will be heard Then two hearts broken Scars heal But never disappear They just conceal the wound
Bob Quigley 1/08/2012
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January 12, 2012 at 9:41 PM
Life cannot exist without some prevarications. Do you think used car salesmen and politicians could make their respective livings if they only told the truth? Good write, Bob.
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January 12, 2012 at 10:52 PM
Not a chance. Thanks Bob
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January 12, 2012 at 11:13 AM
Congratulations on your win Bob, enjoyed reading your poetry. Elizabeth
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January 12, 2012 at 2:57 PM
Many thanks Elizabeth
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January 11, 2012 at 1:59 PM
Congrats on your superb win. Thanks, bl
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January 11, 2012 at 2:37 PM
Appreciate it bl
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January 11, 2012 at 11:08 AM
Congratulations Bob on your win.Another very good poem from you.
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January 11, 2012 at 2:36 PM
Thank you Kash
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January 11, 2012 at 10:23 AM
So cool to see this one in first place Bob :) Congratulations
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January 11, 2012 at 2:36 PM
Thank you Wilma
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January 11, 2012 at 6:06 AM
Congrats on your win!! always Michael
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January 11, 2012 at 7:49 AM
Thanks Michael
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January 11, 2012 at 5:29 AM
Congratulations on the win in Brian's "Show Me" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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January 11, 2012 at 7:50 AM
Appreciate it Carol
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January 11, 2012 at 2:59 AM
Congratulations, Bob. Some real wisdom in those words! Cheers, Maureen :)
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January 11, 2012 at 7:50 AM
Thank you Maureen
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January 11, 2012 at 12:17 AM
one big CHEER for the win, bob.. congrats! :) huggs!
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January 11, 2012 at 7:53 AM
Thanks Nette
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January 10, 2012 at 9:43 PM
Bob, this is profound and wonderful to read. Congrats on your well deserved win!
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January 10, 2012 at 10:17 PM
Thank you Andrea
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January 10, 2012 at 6:47 PM
CONGRATS BOB ON FIRST PLACE WIN.. AND THAN KXXX FOR WARM WELCOME BACK TO PS.. SLOW BUT SURE..
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January 10, 2012 at 10:18 PM
Thank you Linda-Marie. So glad you are on the road to recovery
Susan Avatar
January 10, 2012 at 6:59 AM
I love how you personified the lie in the 3rd verse "it will not stay silent". so true. and i love your ending - a great description of scars. they really do become a part of us.
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January 10, 2012 at 8:29 AM
Thank you Susan. Very kind comments
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January 10, 2012 at 3:38 AM
How very true my friend. Honesty is always the best policy because as the Bible tells us: "Be assured your deeds will find you out." Good job here my friend. God Bless, JB
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January 10, 2012 at 8:30 AM
Thank you Judy. Good to hear from you again
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January 9, 2012 at 2:24 PM
Yes, very true indeed, Bob. Powerful piece. Many congrats on your wins too, my friend : )
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January 10, 2012 at 8:31 AM
As always, my thanks Jack
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January 9, 2012 at 2:17 PM
Very wise... Putting this in my favorites..
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January 10, 2012 at 8:31 AM
Glad you liked it Dana'lynn. Appreciate the honor of your saving it to favs
Neels Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 2:19 PM
This is so true Bob, I could not agree with you more.. enjoyed your wisdom tonight ;)
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January 10, 2012 at 8:32 AM
Thank you Wilma
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January 8, 2012 at 1:19 PM
A nice write :-)
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January 8, 2012 at 2:08 PM
Thanks Darryl
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January 8, 2012 at 1:04 PM
Yes, scars heal Bob.Thank you for sharing it,lovely.OXOX love Anne-Lise
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January 8, 2012 at 2:08 PM
Appreciate it Anne Lise
Smith Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 11:22 AM
Aptly writ. The sociopath has no scars; has no wounds. He just scars others.
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January 8, 2012 at 2:09 PM
So true John. Thanks for your comments
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