The Letter - Letter To My Children Poetry Contest

My dear child, if you read this 
Feel with your heart the warmth of my embrace 
May your days always be filled with bliss 
May your world be always showered with grace 

Don't you forget to always wear a smile 
For, a joyous heart makes a bright new day 
Don't you be hateful, not even for a while 
For, hatefulness caps your heart in gray 

Step on your own pedal and mind your own wheel 
Except when you need to lend a helping hand 
Mind your own feelings but feel what others feel 
Don't you forget to always put your feet on land

Don't you feel envious even for a bit 
For, envy drags a heart to a pitfall of sin 
Learn to throw your own shot and take the hit 
Don't make it a habit to find dirt on people's skin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 8/31/2023 5:52:00 PM
Very sweet and lovely to read. I think within its core the poem also subtly captures the sense of anxiety every parent feels in ensuring they nurture their kids right in all aspects of life and I love that bit of nuance. The simple yet natural and effective rhyming pattern is a cherry on top. Wishing you well!
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Date: 8/31/2023 6:23:00 PM
Thank you very much... I'm actually worried about my child's future because I may be dying soon...
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