I guess I got the rhyme scheme wrong for a rubyaiyat so I withdrew it from contest. Perhaps, I will try again.
The vigor of lemons heals the soul. Squeeze the sun, and be taken for a wild ride through space and time. —Poet The Lemonade of the Sun By clouds, meditation may be solemn, but in fizzy of quenching rays, awesome. Squeeze the lemonade of the sun, Sugar! Not a bouquet, but a single blossom. Dramatic wings detach; they’re on your spine. Pink, red, orange and yellow; so divine. The panorama of bittersweet juice. You’re ready for liftoff; look at your shine! In zero gravity suit; grass rises to meet your boots. Life’s filled with surprises. A royal purple and steel blue pitcher poured into the dawn; drink energizes. You walk on the water of space and time. Your pinions strong, and feathers - soft, sublime. Why dally on the earth; you want to fly. An artist and poet - oh, how you climb!
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