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The Late Walk

Taking a walk by the lovely lake under the canopy of the sunlight watching its effect on the water makes one wish never-ending night With your loved one hand in hand thinking only of one’s deep affection wishing never to let go of your grip feeling assured this is a pure connection The night's atmosphere so haunting making each one’s love to inspire stillness is so totally enrapturing a moment you never want to tire Consider well this providential act that brought us both to be as one stand amazed this all happened by a divine hand, this has done This is a wonder one has to behold love fully pictured by this late walk love so beautifully meant to share memories that a kiss could not block (walking hand in hand!)

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Date: 10/31/2022 8:32:00 AM
Ahh!! Romantic lines penned. A nice setting to enjoy a romantic time. Sara
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 10/31/2022 8:38:00 AM
Thanks Sara, Glad you enjoyed this piece and trust all is well with you. Blessings, Gordon
Date: 10/30/2022 4:15:00 PM
Walking hand in hand is "a pure connection of one’s deep affection." Yes it is, when you're that close. Time is frozen and nothing else matters. This is so beautiful and romantic. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. Many wonderful blessings to you, Gordon. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 10/31/2022 7:40:00 AM
Thanks Brandy, Glad you enjoyed this piece and thought it so beautiful and romantic. Hope you're having a lovely day, Blessings and hugs, Gordon
Date: 10/29/2022 2:11:00 PM
Lovely Gordon. Beautiful description. Loved it. God Bless, JB soup mail
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 10/31/2022 7:38:00 AM
Thanks Judy, Glad you loved it and found it beautiful. God bless you always, Gordon PS: I received your SM when I had just replied to your last one.
Date: 10/28/2022 3:49:00 PM
Wow, Gordon, what a great poet you are! Combinations of imagery, and deep emotion. You also acknowledge the Divine hand…)) Superb verses. So glad you made a comment to my humble scribblings. Feel free to soup me, about new poems any time, I promise to comment. I like reliability, and great poets here. Making this beauty a favorite. Hugs, Pangie
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 10/29/2022 3:41:00 AM
Thanks Pangie,Glad you enjoyed this piece and so honoured you made it a favourite. How's life with you in U.S. ? I'm in Scotland, feel free to soup me anytime too. Blessings always,Gordon

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