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The Last Walk

The shouting thunder may regards him not, His elderly ears are not made for shouts, He recognise the nature's deepness, And walk in shadow, selfless, The pain of his long journey seems, In his eyes which forget to dream, The hardly seen expression, made of tears, And the stable legs, shows how to face fears, How calm , peaceful their dwelling place, Not changed by the life's pace, A place which is very dark and hollow, He walks in shadow to make it glow, He walks to fulfill his last duty, And going to sleep and experience true nature's beauty.

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Date: 12/30/2021 7:46:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet and a well deserved win! Wishing you all the best in the New Year! Blessings, Paulette
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Alok Yadav
Date: 12/30/2021 8:24:00 AM
Thanks ma'am and same to you!
Date: 8/21/2021 11:08:00 AM
Alok, the somber knell tolls e'er so sweetly in your solemn rhyme. My compliments on your respectful placement, Aloha!
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Date: 8/17/2021 7:07:00 PM
It's a Beautiful Rhyme. Congratulations on your Win!
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Date: 7/17/2021 12:15:00 PM
A sad write, Alok! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 7/16/2021 10:32:00 PM
He walks to fulfill his last duty, Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Alok Yadav
Date: 7/16/2021 10:43:00 PM
Thanks sir

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