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The Last Token

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Be gentle as the wind fierce as the stars that shine at night Be careful as a city deer unschooled as the sea Be aware of others but don't lose yourself nor give away the token that was meant for, you

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Alexis Y.

Date: 3/23/2021 5:12:00 PM

WoW! Mystic, You have such a well-written write with a good message and great advice. I enjoyed the read. Have a great day:-)Alexis

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/21/2021 4:46:00 PM

So compelling, especially 'fierce as the stars that shine at night' - very inspiring!

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/21/2021 6:30:00 PM

I think stars are very brave they bling no matter what, thanks for stopping by Michelle.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/21/2021 9:52:00 AM

Wonderful thoughts, MRR. I'm going to work on a poem for your contest, but I'm not quite sure which direction it will take at this moment. I am drawn to the fourth line of your verse, particularly. Thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/21/2021 6:29:00 PM

by all means feel free to join, I will look forward to reading it.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 3/21/2021 8:16:00 AM

Mystic Rose Rose, 'Be careful as a city deer'.., I like the fit & feel of these words. Happy Sunday. -Richard

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/21/2021 6:29:00 PM

Thank you Richard, glad you enjoyed the poem