Mystic Rose Rose Poet Free verse

The Last Token

Be gentle as the wind fierce as the stars 
that shine at night 
Be careful as a city deer unschooled as the sea    
Be aware of others but don't lose yourself  
nor give away the token  that was meant for,  
you

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Alexis Y. March 23, 2021 at 5:12 PM WoW! Mystic, You have such a well-written write with a good message and great advice. I enjoyed the read. Have a great day:-)Alexis

Michelle Faulkner March 21, 2021 at 4:46 PM So compelling, especially 'fierce as the stars that shine at night' - very inspiring! Mystic Rose Rose March 21, 2021 at 6:30 PM I think stars are very brave they bling no matter what, thanks for stopping by Michelle.

L Milton Hankins March 21, 2021 at 9:52 AM Wonderful thoughts, MRR. I'm going to work on a poem for your contest, but I'm not quite sure which direction it will take at this moment. I am drawn to the fourth line of your verse, particularly. Thanks. Mystic Rose Rose March 21, 2021 at 6:29 PM by all means feel free to join, I will look forward to reading it.

Quoth Theraven March 21, 2021 at 8:16 AM Mystic Rose Rose, 'Be careful as a city deer'.., I like the fit & feel of these words. Happy Sunday. -Richard Mystic Rose Rose March 21, 2021 at 6:29 PM Thank you Richard, glad you enjoyed the poem