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The Last Time

Cherry tree rendered
Sweet warm breezes surrender
Petals falling down
Natures blanket we have found
Last love we will remember

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Shadow Hamilton

Date: 4/23/2015 3:15:00 AM

very good Sharon congrats on being featured hugs 7

Tonytocaa Camacho

Date: 4/21/2015 8:53:00 AM

Oh so true,simply beautiful a pleasure to read,Sharon..thanks Tonytocaa

Daver Austin

Date: 4/20/2015 10:24:00 AM

Nice romantic scene. Congrats on the selection. daver

Joy Wellington

Date: 11/1/2010 10:30:00 AM

I love this Tanka. Makes me want to curl up by a fire under a low window, so I can see the leafs falling, a warm cup of apple cider and a significant other at my side. O well, so much for dreaming. Thanks, heaps for your comments. Always, Joy (jew)

Kenneth Zimmerle

Date: 10/31/2010 5:25:00 PM

Very nice. Reminds me of being at my grandmother,s in the country.

James Fraser

Date: 10/31/2010 9:45:00 AM

Cherry and Sukara blossoms are like pink and white snow. It's so sad it only lasts a short while Sharon, but we have your Tanka for ever >> James :)

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 10/30/2010 2:23:00 PM

Very nice with great imagery, Sharon! Love it and enjoyed the picture your describe. Thanks for sharing and thanks for your kind comments on mine. Caroline.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/29/2010 5:55:00 AM

Nice bliss under nature's blanket , Sharon

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/28/2010 5:57:00 PM

lovely tanka Shar

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/28/2010 3:52:00 PM

Sweet Sharon .. if for the contest good luck.. lovely lines of expression tonight ..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/28/2010 3:50:00 PM

Very passionate write that you have graced us with in this one..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..I am happy that you found my work enjoyable..Thanks for your gracious comments..Sara