The Last Rituals 1

Hello friends 
I am coming back after a long gap during which many things happened. I lost my dear wife Shashi in July 2017 who was ill for the last few months. She was not only my life partner but was my inspiration who helped me a lot to write & compose poetry, songs & music etc. 
The Poem is a small homage to my dear wife Shashi. It was written immediately after her death but it’s first part was completed a little later which I am placing here today. The second part would be placed a little later because of Ash ceremony which we completed later at Rishikesh in the Holy water of River Ganges.
Few days before her death I had sent my Premium Membership bank draft of US $64.00 as two years subscription by Registered Post to Poetry Soup but they have neither accepted it nor have they returned the draft to me. As such I cannot write any blog etc.
Love & best wishes


The last rituals

When life flew away from her
Her body became an abode 
Of lasting peace and 
Of calm and quietness
Those moments had made her face blooming 
With a permanent smile 
Which was resting 
On her sweet pleasing face
Like the Lotus blooms and rest on ponds water 
And spread its eternal beauty
To make everyone believe
That she is in the hands of God
Where peace and divine silence exists
Where the soul gets its ultimate solace and rest.  01

Her kind loving eyes were closed
But her face was still alive 
With a divine glory
It was the strangest expression
I have never witnessed 
Ever in my life
On any living or departed soul
As she had the satisfaction
That her life partner 
And all her dear ones 
Were always there with her 
Very close to her body, heart and soul
And still they were with her 
In the hours of her pains and sufferings
All the time till her very last. 02

The stiffness of her hands and leg muscles
Which often used to come to give her unbearable pains
Had gone for ever 
Like the last departed rays of Sun
Which goes beyond the horizons
Leaving her intoxicating golden rays
Similarly she was fully free now 
From the burden of heavy breaths
Light and free 
From all bondages and pains
Everything in her became light and free
Making her hands and body
Soft and smooth like the red velvet Bilboti 
It seemed to me as if
She was in deep sound sleep
In those moments 
And she would wake up soon 
With her evergreen sweet smile 
And good morning
Which used to shine every morning
On her kind and loving face. 03  ....    Part 2 posted seprate.ly
 
Ravindra K Kapoor
India 29th Aug. 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/29/2017 5:17:00 PM
wow, Ravindra, you really worked hard on this one. It's one of the most beautiful tributes I have ever read to a loved one who has recently passed. I am faving this one. I just love how you showed how peaceful she reposed in death.
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 1/12/2018 7:19:00 AM
So sorry dear friend Andrea for missing your precious comment as I was away from internet and also from Kanpur. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra K Kapoor 12th Jan. 2018
Date: 8/29/2017 5:15:00 PM
My dear friend Ravindra, you have honored your dearest departed wife with one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. I am so very sorry for your loss, but I know her spirit will remain with you until you are reunited in the afterlife. Please Soupmail me with whatever you would like to post in a blog and I will be happy to post it for you. Many Blessings, Love, Connie xxoo
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 8/30/2017 9:19:00 AM
Thank you dear friend Connie for your kind words full of your heart's feelings. There are things which we can do but there are many things on which we have no control and we have to to accept as per the will of God. As regarding my problem I have decided not to go for Premium Membership for the time being. More on your page soon. love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
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