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The Last Ride There once was a girl named sally Tortured by a backside tally She dreamed of a trike Instead of this bike As she stared at this death valley

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 3/24/2021 12:41:00 PM
Lol! Mark,I see why it was her last ride. Lil Sally was tortured by “ smelly” valley... :-)Alexis
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Mark Koplin
Date: 3/25/2021 5:03:00 AM
Poor Sally, thanks for stopping by Alexis!
Date: 3/22/2021 10:19:00 AM
Ha, no wonder Sally turned her head... Belle
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Mark Koplin
Date: 3/25/2021 5:02:00 AM
Horrid ride!
Date: 3/21/2021 1:23:00 PM
Lol, thats child abuse surely. Good one Mark. Tom
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Mark Koplin
Date: 3/21/2021 5:52:00 PM
I know right
Date: 3/21/2021 12:20:00 PM
oy my gosh. That poor child....the view, the stench! Ugh.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 3/21/2021 12:33:00 PM
I heard she got pink eye after that ride.
Date: 3/21/2021 12:19:00 PM
ha ha ha that pic is hilariarse as is the poem:-) hugs jan xx
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Mark Koplin
Date: 3/21/2021 12:32:00 PM
I saw this picture on facebook and peed myself. I'm still giggling. lol

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