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November 1, 2023

Poem of the day on November 3, 2023
Placed 2nd: The Last Organ Grinder Contest; Sponsor: Silent One


 

The Last Organ Grinder

He can turn the crank, to tunes of happy song,
One that his crowd has cherished for long,
But something has so terribly gone wrong
For someone has declared: you don’t belong,
O, you don’t belong; no, you do not belong,
As organ music on streets is forever banned
Dismantling livelihood, so long he planned.

So today he turns the crank to words forlorn
As emotions torn, in wistful rhythms mourn,
This miserable morning of a beauteous day,
Oh, the heavens know why the sky is gray,
And the organ blares missives that betray:
Nothing can unsay ~today is that final day.

They watch him grooving as if in festive dance
Feigning happiness, hiding dolorous glance,
Decrying audacity of fate, eerily gone awry,
As he accepts reality, uttering a silent sigh,
Watching the crowd clap, as spirits amplify
His reason for being, reluctant to bid goodbye.

From street to street, he will endeavor to go
Visiting every place familiar, despite angst of woe,
For one last act of songs and music they know,
Collect what he can, past goodwill will bestow;

Turning the crank, to tunes of happy song,
One that his crowd has cherished for long,
Though something has so terribly gone wrong
For someone has declared: you don’t belong,
O, you don’t belong; no, you do not belong.
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Goldsmith Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 7:21 AM
Back with Congratulations on another win. Your "The Last Organ Grinder" is a wonderful write/story. I enjoyed reading it again. Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........
One Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 11:36 AM
From street to street, he will endeavor to go Visiting every place familiar, despite angst of woe, For one last act of songs and music they know, Collect what he can, past goodwill will bestow;... yet he is shunned and told he does not belong.. sad life some have to face.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Canerdy Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 8:07 AM
I see this poem was deemed POTD~~ Well-deserved! You have delved into the deepest feelings of the long-respected and loved, NOW rejected! Janice
Nicole Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 1:17 PM
Dear Vijay, after reading this, there's so many emotions tangling around each other. This thought touched my heart so deeply- "For someone has declared: you don’t belong." So sad hearing these words and feeling this emotion within. Your thoughts caress gently around me. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Pandit Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 6:13 AM
So very kind of you as always, my friend. Always a joy to read your feedback. Many thanks, Brandy. Hugs to you as well.
Kendrick Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 11:16 AM
A sad one penned in this POTD. Congratulations on being selected with this delightful but sad work. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Pandit Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 6:12 AM
Glad to see you again Sara. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Buehler Avatar
November 11, 2023 at 12:24 PM
I'm back with delighted belated congratulations on your POTD honors, Vijay. Well done!
Pandit Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 6:12 AM
Thank you for your return visit, my friend--much appreciate.
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 7:02 PM
Seeing lots of poems that got POTD recently. Big belated congrats for this one!
Pandit Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 6:11 AM
Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.
Eslinger Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 7:17 AM
Vijay! A stupendous poem & well-deserved POTD, You made this nostalgic s Character come visually, virtually alive for me. I almost thought i could go ooen my door to see & listen. Really! Plus, you stirred heartstrings. Moved to mourn yet another ending of a lovely thing our busy age has brought to an end. Magnificent poem. I’m truly envious here of your talent & skill. Bravo! My hugs, sally
Pandit Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 6:07 AM
So special to read your glowing feedback, Sally. Much appreciate your valued remarks, my friend. Many thanks.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 6:19 AM
And I see it was indeed a POTD! Congratulations!
Pandit Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 6:05 AM
Thanks, Again.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 6:18 AM
A winner in my book! A fave! The monorhymes are wonderful! The refrain hurts deep. Hugs ~ Kim
Pandit Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 6:05 AM
So very kind of you my friend. Many, many thanks for your feedback and your FAVE, Kim.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 9:33 PM
My belated congratulations on your POTD.
Pandit Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 6:04 AM
Thank you Victor.
Roper Avatar
November 4, 2023 at 9:45 AM
Heartfelt with imagery and great rhyme , my friend. Good luck in the contest as it will do well. Enjoyed reading my friend. Stay safe have a nice weekend.
Pandit Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 6:04 AM
Many thanks Eve. Always a joy when you visit my friend. Much appreciate, as always.
Sharma  Avatar
November 4, 2023 at 1:22 AM
Oh my, this poem is so full of nostalgic emotions and reveries that bring to light those phases of transformations that accompany life with changing generations beyond time. How the lively spirit of the organ grinder gets faded, where he is no longer have wanted, but he still is the magician of tunes within his heart.. There's a very evocative touch in this poem, which I felt deeply within my soul. That's why, I it received the well deserved honour of POTD! Your wordplay and rhymes-BRILLIANT wow
Sharma  Avatar
November 4, 2023 at 1:24 AM
A Fav for me truly, best of luck to you in the contest as well!
Lawrence Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 9:07 PM
I enjoyed the energy and the walk down memory lane of an artist now quiet with the changing times . Such memories evoked of engaging moments delighting all. Congratulations on POTD dear Vijay ! Susan :)
Pandit Avatar
November 4, 2023 at 11:51 AM
So glad to see you again Susan. Much appreciate your kind remarks, my friend. Many thanks.
Baker Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 8:33 PM
I've read this poem twice and both times, I was interrupted and failed to comment, Vijay. I enjoyed reading about the organ grinder and your poem was very informative. Good luck in the contest! Congratulations on your POTD! Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Bill
Pandit Avatar
November 4, 2023 at 11:50 AM
Much appreciate your kind thoughts, Bill. Many thanks for visiting and commenting, my friend. I am always glad to see you.
Andresen Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 2:35 PM
- Back to congratulate you on your p.o.t.d., Vijay :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Pandit Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 4:38 PM
Thank you for your return visit, Anne-Lise. Much appreciate.
Edmonds  Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 1:12 PM
A wonderful poem Vijay, organ grinders are indeed very much missed. Congratulations on receiving the award for poem of the day… Belle
Pandit Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 4:37 PM
Much appreciate your visit and comments, Belle. Yes--they were quite unique back then. Many thanks.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 12:53 PM
Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading it again. Have a great day...............
Pandit Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 4:36 PM
Thank you Paula--much appreciate.
Poet Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 9:37 AM
Hearty Congratulations to the well-earned POTD, Vijay. Your poetry's sadness implied the organ grinder had been demoted. Perhaps his spirit needed a vacation from singing to the world. When the music stopped flowing from his instrument, the homeless man had nowhere to go. The brilliance of this exceptional contest entry cannot be overlooked. I wish you all the best with the contest.
Pandit Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 4:36 PM
Much appreciate your thoughtful insights my friend. Many thanks for your valued presence and kind remarks.
La France Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 9:02 AM
Vijay, wonderful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor.
Pandit Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 12:00 PM
So nice to hear from you, Constance. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
May Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 8:48 AM
"As he turns the crank wistful rhythms mourn," Very nicely penned Vijay, Congrats on POTD
Pandit Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 11:59 AM
Much appreciate your kind feedback, Joseph--many thanks.
M  Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 7:39 AM
Congratulations Vijay for another wonderful Vijay write….tinged with a dash of sadness! Lovely…..Debx
Pandit Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 11:58 AM
Glad you stopped by Deb. Many thanks, my friend.
Empress Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 7:33 AM
Back to congratulate you on POTD. Well deserved!
Pandit Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 11:58 AM
Thank you my friend, for your return visit. Much appreciate your presence on my page and on Soup.
Williams Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 7:05 AM
Another masterpiece Vijay. A,sad day indeed for the Last Organ Grinder. Congratulations on a well chosen POTD, sure to be a Winner in the contest. Good luck dear friend...Hugs
Pandit Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 11:57 AM
So special to hear that from you, Maria. I know how much you cherish poetry and your video presentations that are splendidly done, always. Many thanks my friend. Hugs to you as well.
Doll Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 6:59 AM
Vijay, another masterpiece. Congratulations on POTD~ Warren
Pandit Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 7:54 AM
So nice to hear that, Warren. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.
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