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23.10.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- The Last Organ Grinder -
 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Silent One

2st place in the contest

- The Last Organ Grinder -

    The young mother died,
    before she could hold her newborn child
    Paternity was unknown
    the secret his mother had never shared
    The boy was cradled in the arms of his grandmother
    they were aged poor people in the countryside
    a few chickens and four cows in the barn were all they had

                              no prosperity
                    gossiping at the child's birth -
                          bite thy sinful tongue

    Characterized by tight finances and little food
    The grandfather found hope in the hopeless
    The economy needed a boost
    In the wood shed he found the antique organ grinder
    Polished it shiny and gave it fresh colors
    Life was not meant to be lived in wealth
    the organ pipes were still breathing …
    gave hope for a simpler everyday life
    Every afternoon he took it on his back
    and went his way with heavy steps
    it was jingling coin that drew him
    ... a shame to live on alms

                             daily health and toil
                   the poor man's pride and honour -
                            hope in his tired eyes
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Goldsmith Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 7:28 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your wonderful/creative write/picture. Hugs... Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........
One Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 11:42 AM
Your narrative is great story telling and an honest reflection on organ grinders.. great imagination.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Baker Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 1:12 AM
This made me happy just seeing the image at the top. :-) A beautiful Narrative poem, my friend. A hard life but a good life. I could feel the character of this fine old fellow. Good luck in the contest. Bill
Volumes Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 9:04 AM
This is beautiful dear Anne-Lise. Told in your unmistakable style, you bring the characters to life. Now where are you, you haven't written a poem for days?
Kaufman Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 3:37 AM
Hi there, This poem paints such great visuals. Enjoyed.
Rolland Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 5:00 PM
very touching poem, gracious melody of art, love music , everywhere and now, thanks poet
Lamoureux Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 2:10 PM
I like the inclusion of haiku. It adds to the quirky feel of this piece.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 9:26 AM
Very creative and original. A wonderful poem and a great solution with the organ grinder. Loved this poem by Anne Lise. Blessings.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 8:19 AM
Enjoyed this write very much, Anne-Lise! …the organ pipes were still breathing…a shame to live on alms…his ingenuity might bring a bit of life back to the streets and to his pockets.
Empress Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 7:49 AM
Wow what an excellent creative take on this prompt! Ah i need to get started to write for this too. Yours is so good! Its like you can do any prompt and still sound so imaginative! With such poignant and thoughtful lines! The last paragraph made me feel so much sigh!but I love so many lines in this touching narrative! So descriptive and moving! Pleasure reading this! Goodluck for the contest; i bet silent one will love this. Felt this. Fave for me
Inman Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 8:42 PM
Anne-Lise you have woven a lovely, sad story with a beautifully descriptive setting.
Andresen Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 1:41 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, James ... a simple life in poverty ... but rich in heart :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 5:29 PM
A beautiful story you crafted. I could only come up with a limerick!
Andresen Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 1:38 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Andrea :) - hugs
Parker Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 3:35 PM
This powerful poem is about doing what needs to be done in extreme circumstances, driven by the power of love...good luck dear poet
Andresen Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 1:35 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Frederic ... everything to survive with love :) - hugs
Poet Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 12:26 PM
Anne-Lise, Your words have been expertly woven together, capturing the essence of the profound emotional state of a newborn without care. Your writing evokes sympathy, as a calm heart remains unshaken in the midst of the world's chaos and turmoil. Your piece's elegant composition truly demonstrates your talent.
Andresen Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 1:33 AM
- Many thanks for your comment ... always uplifting words from you, Las :) - hugs
Mcintosh Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 7:52 AM
Exceptional. love it. God bless you with a win, sweet lady. love, Gina
Andresen Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 1:32 AM
- Many thanks for your comment ... appreciate your words, Gina :) - hugs
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