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The Last Movie

There’s no need to talk anymore I am talked out There is a silence of tongues And the drinks hang heavy in the air Old men on benches Watch the town die From the boarded up windows To the grocery shutdown The tip jar is lite And the strippers all left town I wander down the street In my medical gown Fanny blowing in the wind Grasping at straws And metal band saws Till my fingers bleed crazy They wouldn’t let me out So I broke free the chains That made me insane Headed up downtown For a nightcap But the town was closed up The gutters full of glass And needle’s aplenty I laughed and lunged Like a fool in the street But whole damn town was empty Now it’s been two years Since I broke out And nobody seems to miss me My brother has died And my Ma took in cleaning Just to make ends meet I’m still sitting around in my gown Waiting for the last movie.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/10/2013 6:38:00 PM
I felt the sense of solitude very strongly throughout. That mixed with pain and confusion. Everything will soon be clear. A very thought-provoking piece. Keep your head above water my friend. Always, Laura
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 8/10/2013 7:03:00 PM
Still dog paddling. But I can still come up for air. thank you for caring. Kilmer
Date: 8/10/2013 11:05:00 AM
A chilling glimpse of someone who was out of it for a while, "So I broke free the chains That made me insane" and takes a trip back to a dark hazy reality that doesn't pick up where it left off... Well done as usual :)
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 8/10/2013 3:20:00 PM
"what a long strange trip were on"...Yes I was once lost but not so sure if I have been found or what I have found. Thanks for commenting. Always, Kilmer.
Date: 8/9/2013 10:11:00 AM
Like a fool in the street... oh how unwise Not to be streetwise!! You captured the mood out there.
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Stephen Kilmer
Date: 8/9/2013 1:14:00 PM
Thanks Gerald. I appreciate the comment and you are correct, one must streetwise!! Kilmer

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