The Last Moon

To sit confused
watching stars split the night
they pass no judgment or reason

The moon appears to cradle darkness
and moves across a sea of black
sharing my loneliness with nothing of purpose
A reflection of what is and what has been
a slow arc of brightness,
that becomes another light in the sky
that brought silence to my world
a pause with questions
opened by moonbeams of illusion
hoping to arrive at a destination of answers
before grief overwhelms my soul

Trying to wrap my mind around,
an empty bed, behind a closed door
that led to muddy footprints
trailing away into the night,   leaving nothing,
Love caught in a wheel moving towards retreat
where I alone catch my tears,  before dawn
and say goodbye to the last moon of our love
that greeted the evening of our desires
before stars split the night in confusion

4/7/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Wood Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 10:10 PM
This is wonderful Frederic. A very smooth flow and it evoked such a sad and empathetic response in me. That's when you know you have a winner. Congratulations!
Ashley Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 5:26 PM
Hi Frederic, such a moving, tender and grieved expression of lost love. My heart breaks. A gorgeous write. Congratulations on your win! :)
Richards Avatar
April 17, 2017 at 1:08 PM
This melancholy poem deserves such high praise, Frederic, and catches the heart and squeezes it until one is breathless. Sadly beautiful... You are an exceptional writer. Congratulations on a fine win! :)
Puddifoot Avatar
April 17, 2017 at 6:31 AM
andrea knows what i like! lol...the quality is always there from you, and this proves once again that you are as adept at free verse as you are at writing sonnets...a dreamy feel to this poem, but with a harsher, painful reality underpinning it...i love the line "questions opened by moonbeams of illusion", and i like the way the closing line ties back in with the opening lines - congrats on your win in my contest!
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2017 at 12:12 AM
wow, this is SO amazing, Frederic. This is right up her alley and I will be surprised if your poem is not picked for a win. i LOVE this. SEVEN
Wanter Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 6:13 PM
So very expressive as if the lost love was immediate with feelings running their deepest.
Green Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 4:26 PM
Wow Frederic, this was so good. A deeply sad but beautifully written sadness. I love the ending, that just made this piece perfect.
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