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Poem written for and submitted to "Pen To Quote 2" poetry contest, Sotto Poet, sponsor, November 11, 2025.

 

THE LAST MIGRATION

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You cannot escape the responsibility of tomorrow by evading it today. - Abraham Lincoln Silence gathers like dust on the piano lid—unplayed songs folded into brittle paper wings. The hummingbird feeder hangs empty, sunlight glinting off dried nectar. Each day our hands relearn the slow syntax of stiffness. Morning pills rattle accusations in amber bottles. Who will read the warning labels when our eyes retreat? Childless. No daughters to decipher our fading ink. No sons to steady the wobble of ascending stairs. Lincoln’s shadow lengthens across the porch: Tomorrow arrives hungry. You cannot feed it yesterday’s excuses. We scan horizons for villages built of shared tremors where neighbors become soft euphemistic nouns—caregiver, listener, stayer~ before the light fails completely.
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Wolf Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 7:50 PM
Amazing write, Sara. An instant fave for me. The way you have framed life's tomorrow -- here today -- is memorable. Thank you for sharing this with us. Bravery amidst Frailty, Gershon
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November 24, 2025 at 6:23 PM
thank you, Gershon, for your meaningful comments. Grateful for the fave and your insights. Always makes my day when you enjoy one of my poems. thanks, Sara
Rolland Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 10:24 PM
a very moving poem, life with ups and downs, so well written
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 6:23 PM
many thanks, Yann
Gauthier Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 7:51 PM
A moving tribute, Sara ~
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November 24, 2025 at 6:23 PM
thank you, Line.
DiMino Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 6:50 AM
Indeed, we are all mere flickers in the greater scheme of time. Maybe, not here to change the world...just to reestablish our own relationship with God. Who knows? A thoughtful poem. Very well written! "Tomorrow arrives hungry. You cannot feed it yesterday’s excuses." -- Love that!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 6:24 PM
I like your initial comment/question....I ponder the same thoughts sometimes. I appreciate the fact that you found my poem meaningful. Your support means a great deal to me....have a blessed week, Sara
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