The Last Masterpiece

She flowed out of his sable brush 
As if form became fluid
Indigo blue the first of hues
Each stroke a caress …


A teardrop sliding down his face
His memories piercing his heart
Sighs and a deep breath 
His lifetime masterpiece awaits …


Silver lit hair black as night
Her Indigo eyes abrim with love
Soft white skin transparent
A white spotted dress of cornflower blue 
silk trimmed waist
Forever imprinted in Memory
A testament to their Love


Raising his hand wrinkled through time
the curve of her breast takes shape
her form follows next …


Pausing for thought ,
he remembers a day etched fast in his mind
Around her head , 
Mists of water rainbow hues
Behind her a waterfall of crystal blue
Shadow and shape suggest beings
The faeries she hoarded
Dancing like angels around her head
These he added as she would be pleased …


His hand starts to shake 
effort and time taking its toll
mad with mother time 
robbing him of his one great gift
this would be his last …


Pouring 50 years of marriage 
His heart and soul
Smeared , brushed , and smudged
Light and dark no dis chord
Finished he is complete
His one great masterpiece
His wife his love …


Packing away his palette
an artisan to his gift
closing the lid on colour
washing his brushes 
and cleaning knives
Weathered hands tremble
Reaching for a glass
The bottle , a sherry he saved ,
from a golden anniversary
their last …


Taking a sip he closes his eyes
waiting for memory to carry him back
To a time beloved …
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Anish Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 10:45 PM
Quite a fine portrait of a portrait painter! Intriguing - well done! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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March 6, 2014 at 8:51 AM
I decided to look up your first posted poem to see the beginnings...And yes, you began with a masterpiece of your own...
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March 8, 2014 at 9:21 AM
I wrote this one a lifetime ago so much has happened since then I may even edit this one and improve on it, I always find I want to do that with old works but there are a few I will never touch thanks for taking a trip back in time and reminding me of this poem it was the first of many many more love Jaynex
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February 3, 2014 at 9:41 PM
Jayne...truly a memorable work! To mine faves...jimbo
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September 29, 2009 at 12:15 PM
Jayne, congratulations on making the first round of the contest, best of luck...Raul
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September 25, 2009 at 3:16 PM
Just want to add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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September 24, 2009 at 3:54 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
Brown Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 10:25 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Jayne. Love, Carol
Adeite Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 3:01 PM
Hey, thy theme, thrust and tone 's emotional... You are such a wonderful poet. Please keep writing and congratulations on your awesome piece being featured this week. You are great Jayne! Adeleke
Moreno Avatar
July 9, 2009 at 11:30 PM
Jayne, congrats on your feature...Raul
Mason Avatar
July 9, 2009 at 8:49 AM
Beautiful, poignant poem Jayne! Welcome to PoetrySoup and congratulations on your writing being featured this week !!
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July 6, 2009 at 2:19 PM
What a heartfelt poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. Congratulations on being featured this week! I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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July 6, 2009 at 12:15 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful featured poem! Laura :)
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July 6, 2009 at 10:45 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem>>James
Brown Avatar
July 6, 2009 at 5:59 AM
Outstanding. Congratulations on your featured poem this week Jayne. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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July 5, 2009 at 11:27 PM
Kudus on this wonderful poetry. God bless and more success. Ernilando
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June 15, 2009 at 8:20 AM
Hope there is more like this to come from your pen Jayne.Thank you for your welcome comments on my posting today.Rgds Brian
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May 23, 2009 at 11:49 PM
Jayne, congrats on your feature...Raul
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May 23, 2009 at 4:58 PM
Congrats Jayne on this well written poem "The Last Masterpiece" being featured. Vince
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May 22, 2009 at 2:17 PM
Jayne, This poem is a masterpiece. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep writing, Love and Hugs, Dane
Adeite Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 7:24 AM
I love the passion with which you write, this piece is awesome. Great you .Congrats on your wonderful poem being featured this week. love Leke
Shango Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 7:12 AM
Where have I been ... yes, yes, this is something my soul is thirsty to read ... congratulation on it being featured ... superb writing.
Mazzone Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 4:06 PM
This was a beautiful poem! I really enjoyed it! Congratulations on being featured... I'm new to this site too so welcome! And I look forward to reading more from you - Aimee
Eggins Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 8:48 PM
Thank you for the comment .. and yes I am new to soup I joined last week .. Its a lovely site and everyone has been so nice .. thank you for the warm welcome its very much appreciated .. Love Jayne
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May 19, 2009 at 1:19 PM
I read the other comments....The soup is new to you? Let me add my encouragement with the other soupers. We want to hear much more form you, and welcome. Love, daver
Austin Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 1:16 PM
Good story, well told. Congrats on this one. Love, daver
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