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The Last Masterpiece

She flowed out of his sable brush As if form became fluid Indigo blue the first of hues Each stroke a caress … A teardrop sliding down his face His memories piercing his heart Sighs and a deep breath His lifetime masterpiece awaits … Silver lit hair black as night Her Indigo eyes abrim with love Soft white skin transparent A white spotted dress of cornflower blue silk trimmed waist Forever imprinted in Memory A testament to their Love Raising his hand wrinkled through time the curve of her breast takes shape her form follows next … Pausing for thought , he remembers a day etched fast in his mind Around her head , Mists of water rainbow hues Behind her a waterfall of crystal blue Shadow and shape suggest beings The faeries she hoarded Dancing like angels around her head These he added as she would be pleased … His hand starts to shake effort and time taking its toll mad with mother time robbing him of his one great gift this would be his last … Pouring 50 years of marriage His heart and soul Smeared , brushed , and smudged Light and dark no dis chord Finished he is complete His one great masterpiece His wife his love … Packing away his palette an artisan to his gift closing the lid on colour washing his brushes and cleaning knives Weathered hands tremble Reaching for a glass The bottle , a sherry he saved , from a golden anniversary their last … Taking a sip he closes his eyes waiting for memory to carry him back To a time beloved …

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Date: 5/20/2014 10:45:00 PM
Quite a fine portrait of a portrait painter! Intriguing - well done! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/6/2014 8:51:00 AM
I decided to look up your first posted poem to see the beginnings...And yes, you began with a masterpiece of your own...
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 3/8/2014 9:21:00 AM
I wrote this one a lifetime ago so much has happened since then I may even edit this one and improve on it, I always find I want to do that with old works but there are a few I will never touch thanks for taking a trip back in time and reminding me of this poem it was the first of many many more love Jaynex
Date: 2/3/2014 9:41:00 PM
Jayne...truly a memorable work! To mine faves...jimbo
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Date: 9/29/2009 12:15:00 PM
Jayne, congratulations on making the first round of the contest, best of luck...Raul
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Date: 9/25/2009 3:16:00 PM
Just want to add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 3:54:00 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/24/2009 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Jayne. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2009 3:01:00 PM
Hey, thy theme, thrust and tone 's emotional... You are such a wonderful poet. Please keep writing and congratulations on your awesome piece being featured this week. You are great Jayne! Adeleke
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Date: 7/9/2009 11:30:00 PM
Jayne, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 7/9/2009 8:49:00 AM
Beautiful, poignant poem Jayne! Welcome to PoetrySoup and congratulations on your writing being featured this week !!
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Date: 7/6/2009 2:19:00 PM
What a heartfelt poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. Congratulations on being featured this week! I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/6/2009 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 7/6/2009 10:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem>>James
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Date: 7/6/2009 5:59:00 AM
Outstanding. Congratulations on your featured poem this week Jayne. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2009 11:27:00 PM
Kudus on this wonderful poetry. God bless and more success. Ernilando
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Date: 6/15/2009 8:20:00 AM
Hope there is more like this to come from your pen Jayne.Thank you for your welcome comments on my posting today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/23/2009 11:49:00 PM
Jayne, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 5/23/2009 4:58:00 PM
Congrats Jayne on this well written poem "The Last Masterpiece" being featured. Vince
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Date: 5/22/2009 2:17:00 PM
Jayne, This poem is a masterpiece. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep writing, Love and Hugs, Dane
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Date: 5/21/2009 7:24:00 AM
I love the passion with which you write, this piece is awesome. Great you .Congrats on your wonderful poem being featured this week. love Leke
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Date: 5/21/2009 7:12:00 AM
Where have I been ... yes, yes, this is something my soul is thirsty to read ... congratulation on it being featured ... superb writing.
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Date: 5/20/2009 4:06:00 PM
This was a beautiful poem! I really enjoyed it! Congratulations on being featured... I'm new to this site too so welcome! And I look forward to reading more from you - Aimee
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Date: 5/19/2009 8:48:00 PM
Thank you for the comment .. and yes I am new to soup I joined last week .. Its a lovely site and everyone has been so nice .. thank you for the warm welcome its very much appreciated .. Love Jayne
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Date: 5/19/2009 1:19:00 PM
I read the other comments....The soup is new to you? Let me add my encouragement with the other soupers. We want to hear much more form you, and welcome. Love, daver
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Date: 5/19/2009 1:16:00 PM
Good story, well told. Congrats on this one. Love, daver
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