The Last Line

THE LAST LINE

sighs pressed to lips and cheeks  blest union of souls  i rest in peace

12/26/2018

Contest: The Last Line
Sponsor: Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Andresen Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 1:12 PM
- Congratulations on your win :) - Best wishes for the new year, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 1:39 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Faulkner Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 3:45 PM
Very meaningful and moving, congratulations on your placement, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 7:24 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 8:49 AM
Beautiful. x
Rodrigues Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 3:27 PM
Thank you, Maureen!
Y. Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 8:29 AM
Hi Kim, I agree with Silent, you've penned such a deep one-liner. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 3:27 PM
Thank you, Alexis!
One Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 6:43 AM
Deep one liner Kim.. Have a great start to the new year.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
Rodrigues Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 8:17 AM
Happy New Year, Silent! Thank you!
Wolf Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 9:49 PM
Lovely words, lovingly and meaningfully penned, Kim. G.L. in the contest! Holiday wishes, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 9:54 PM
Holiday wishes for you too! Thank you, Gershon!
Gentile Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 3:05 PM
This a great entry for the contest Kim, Very touching xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 3:15 PM
Thank you, Mike!
Andresen Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 2:28 PM
- Touching and beautiful monoku, Kim - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 2:36 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Sands Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 1:38 PM
Oh, this is beautiful Kim! Very well done :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 1:49 PM
Thank you, Heidi! xx
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