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The Last Fall

Gabbled by the emptiness in the deaf of silence Drowned by the turbulent liquid nailed the limbs Echoing the rambling alphabets formed into sprite Roaming around the corner of her head Trapped by own shield, locked by own shadow Inviting the cliff to come for grief Couldn't glimpse the hole of little sunlight Ready to fall and kiss the soil Heavy shoulder commanded the head to bow And altered the eyes to be blinded For the cruel tail of some Cursed her lofty flight to grasp the highest life Unspeakable lips lived by white sand Storm handled the massive sighs of hers Counting silently the ruined pages She who quoted to be gigantic in the wild eyes

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Date: 6/12/2013 10:29:00 AM
This poem is deep and plenty of imaging, as you use in your excellent poetry
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Elai Cee
Date: 6/23/2013 7:30:00 AM
thank you Mario, nice to see u here
Date: 6/8/2013 4:38:00 AM
Poignant metorphoric use that drew me in to this dreamy poem of yours my friend.
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Elai Cee
Date: 6/8/2013 7:26:00 AM
thank u my friend
Date: 6/6/2013 10:44:00 PM
Very sad write, well written!!- edward
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Date: 6/6/2013 7:53:00 AM
Very sad poem based on betrayal by loved one wonderfully done. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/3/2013 8:54:00 PM
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Nato Calubiran
Date: 6/4/2013 7:50:00 PM
ah. ganun ba aus din ah. hahaha Like
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Elai Cee
Date: 6/4/2013 3:55:00 AM
wala lang gusto ko lng magsulat...sayang ung idea sa mind eh kung mawawala lang ...kaya mas magandang magsulat nalang... na-share u pa heheh
Date: 6/3/2013 1:48:00 PM
solid write glowing with marked images all the way... gloriously written!..:) huggs
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Elai Cee
Date: 6/6/2013 7:30:00 AM
thank u net.
Date: 6/3/2013 9:57:00 AM
Massive impact here! The battle against self, the most powerful of them all.
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Elai Cee
Date: 6/3/2013 10:02:00 AM
u are also a massive interpreter i have known! good to see you here Drake!

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