The Last Fall

Gabbled by the emptiness in the deaf of silence
Drowned by the turbulent liquid nailed the limbs
Echoing the rambling alphabets formed into sprite
Roaming around the corner of her head

Trapped by own shield, locked by own shadow
Inviting the cliff to come for grief
Couldn't glimpse the hole of little sunlight 
Ready to fall and kiss the soil

Heavy shoulder commanded the head to bow
And altered the eyes to be blinded
For the cruel tail of some
Cursed her lofty flight to grasp the highest life

Unspeakable lips lived by white sand
Storm handled the massive sighs of hers
Counting silently the ruined pages
She who quoted to be gigantic in the wild eyes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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De Paz Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 10:29 AM
This poem is deep and plenty of imaging, as you use in your excellent poetry
Cee Avatar
June 23, 2013 at 7:30 AM
thank you Mario, nice to see u here
Mohammed Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 4:38 AM
Poignant metorphoric use that drew me in to this dreamy poem of yours my friend.
Cee Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 7:26 AM
thank u my friend
Orozco Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 10:44 PM
Very sad write, well written!!- edward
Devnath  Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 7:53 AM
Very sad poem based on betrayal by loved one wonderfully done. Loved always, bl
Calubiran Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 8:54 PM
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Calubiran Avatar
June 4, 2013 at 7:50 PM
ah. ganun ba aus din ah. hahaha Like
Cee Avatar
June 4, 2013 at 3:55 AM
wala lang gusto ko lng magsulat...sayang ung idea sa mind eh kung mawawala lang ...kaya mas magandang magsulat nalang... na-share u pa heheh
Onclaud Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 1:48 PM
solid write glowing with marked images all the way... gloriously written!..:) huggs
Cee Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 7:30 AM
thank u net.
Tacito Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 9:57 AM
Massive impact here! The battle against self, the most powerful of them all.
Cee Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 10:02 AM
u are also a massive interpreter i have known! good to see you here Drake!
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