The Last Chapter

There is a beginning to every end..So that last empty chapter might as well be your first to fulfill,with those desires yet unfulfilled,and new memories made.Deep poem.We ve all been there in that hollow place ..sometimes Surrounded by many yet feeling all alone..but its not a forever feeling...Have a sunny warm day

Oh I felt the torment within this dim write! It's a very well-thought out poem, and so awesomely crafted that I am in awe of its incredible splendor! You poem is so distressing, and I can feel the hurt and pain especially at the end! I enjoyed this darker poem, something I would enjoy to write! Great Work Arthur!

This short poem is something I can so much relate to.... Beautiful, short and sad.

Empty waiting for your magical words......Seren

Such sadness Art...wonderfully done in your style

Great job depicting despair, Arthur. Strong images. I hope it's a fictional write and not a reflection of how you feel.

oh so sad Arthur such deep imagery of depression - you have some lovely cyber friends who would encourage you get some sticky tape, mend that quill and keep the poems flowing:-) hugs jan xx