The Last Act

leaf of life mutates
to waltz within winds of change
woodland stage awaits.

© Harry J Horsman  2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2012 at 1:44 PM
Another awesome one to review!!
Augustus Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 1:26 PM
Nice!!!!!! This is awesome. It flows perfectly. I think this is beautifully written. Congratulations on your fifth place win!
K. Avatar
September 13, 2010 at 11:07 PM
Hi again Harry-- I don't think I've congratulated you yet with this wonderful haiku-- so congrats :)!!-- nikko :)
Freeman Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 2:19 PM
Congratulations(!) Harry on your fifth place poem!! Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 3:50 AM
Congratulations on your win Harry in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 6:26 PM
Beautiful imagery, Harry! Insightful too. Thanks for reading mine and your kind comments. Peace, Audrey
Roberts Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 4:35 PM
nice one, congrats on your win in the contest
Smalling Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 11:15 AM
An exceptional write ... like a painting on the fabric of time. One love
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 10:54 AM
Hey, congratulations, Harry. It's nice to have a bit of time here to see the winning poems. But I won't have much time, hopefully I can see more poems of yours later. LUv, Andrea
Falotico Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 4:43 AM
Great Haiku and win !!! what a perfect write my friend...Michael
Devonshire Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 4:19 AM
Congratulations, Harry!
Neels Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 4:11 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beauty Harry.. Enjoy your day, love Wilma
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 9:52 PM
Loud applause from me on this most beautiful haiku! I was so happy to see it in the winner's circle. As you know, I adored it. Congratulations Harry. hugs, Connie
Haick Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 7:45 PM
Ooh! Love this. Congratulations on your 5th Place win, Harry. Peace, Audrey
Mehta Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 6:56 PM
Congratulations for fifth place win in the contest, harry
Scripca Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 5:37 PM
Beautifully penned, dear Harry. Congrats!
Taylor Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 5:30 PM
Congrats, Harry. Nice going. Ralph
Johnson Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 5:10 PM
very well done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 5:04 PM
Congrats Harry on your big win in Rick's contest.. a lovely write.. and win .. enjoy with luv..my friend..
Gorelick Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 4:58 PM
Your second line is super..congrats on your win. BG
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 2:30 PM
A PERFECT Haiku Harry! A sure winner if you entered it into the contest. I just love it and the way you write. Mahalo, Connie
Kendrick Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 3:42 AM
Well thought out by the sage...Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..Glad that I chose this one to read..Sara
Scripca Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 10:11 PM
Just an inspiring Haiku. I miss the dramatic change of the seasons here in S. California though. Thank you for your comment and good luck to both of us in the contest :) All the best, iolanda
K. Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 3:14 PM
I definitely could see that leaf waltzing-- enjoyed the alliteration here too-- very vivid, this made me smile :) -- nikko :)
Delacroix Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 10:28 AM
Love it, Harry! Very beautiful and creative Haiku! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poems. Caroline.
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