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The Last Acorn Sitting In The Tree

Little acorn sitting in the tree, wanting to be free. Little acorn now on the ground, please do not step on me. Little acorn no more, now I am that huge tree I always wanted to be. Date Written: 4/15/2020

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Date: 4/24/2020 5:42:00 PM
great way to set up this little pome. nice work!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/24/2020 11:38:00 PM
Glad you like. Thanks for your note. Have a wonderful weekend............
Date: 4/21/2020 8:23:00 PM
Paula, I loved how the spacing can yield two poems, together and different. DON'T STEP on my corn or ACORN, LOL! shalom, shalom
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/23/2020 1:12:00 PM
I do not know why it is spaced the way it is. It will not change back. Thanks for your note. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day.......
Date: 4/19/2020 9:14:00 AM
Clever and fun. I am glad no one stepped on you.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/19/2020 11:38:00 AM
I enjoyed writing this. Thanks for your note. Glad you like it. Yes, please do not step on me for I will not grow to be a huge tree. Have a wonderful day............
Date: 4/16/2020 6:32:00 PM
oh wow, I did an acorn poem but I did not think up a really cool way to end it, like you did. EXCELLENT.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/17/2020 5:28:00 PM
Thanks for your note. So glad you like it. WOW! an EXCELLENT from you. I am honored. Have a great day.............