Paula Goldsmith Poet Personification

The Last Acorn Sitting In the Tree

Little acorn sitting in the tree,                                                                                                                               wanting to be free.                                                                                                                                              Little acorn now on the ground,                                                                                                                             please do not step on me.                                                                                                                                  Little acorn no more,                                                                                                                                                 now I am that huge tree I always wanted to be.

Date Written: 4/15/2020

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Joan C. Fingon April 24, 2020 at 5:42 PM great way to set up this little pome. nice work! Paula Goldsmith April 24, 2020 at 11:38 PM Glad you like. Thanks for your note. Have a wonderful weekend............

Anil Deo April 21, 2020 at 8:23 PM Paula, I loved how the spacing can yield two poems, together and different. DON'T STEP on my corn or ACORN, LOL! shalom, shalom Paula Goldsmith April 23, 2020 at 1:12 PM I do not know why it is spaced the way it is. It will not change back. Thanks for your note. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day.......

Richard Lamoureux April 19, 2020 at 9:14 AM Clever and fun. I am glad no one stepped on you. Paula Goldsmith April 19, 2020 at 11:38 AM I enjoyed writing this. Thanks for your note. Glad you like it. Yes, please do not step on me for I will not grow to be a huge tree. Have a wonderful day............

Andrea Dietrich April 16, 2020 at 6:32 PM oh wow, I did an acorn poem but I did not think up a really cool way to end it, like you did. EXCELLENT. Paula Goldsmith April 17, 2020 at 5:28 PM Thanks for your note. So glad you like it. WOW! an EXCELLENT from you. I am honored. Have a great day.............