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The Last, a First

the last of seven hard-fought contests high school band celebrates a first the last of four tries to birth a son finds them with five girls AND a first

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Date: 12/14/2014 11:19:00 AM
wow, this one is so fascinating. HOw did it not place higher? congrats on the winners' list.
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Date: 12/11/2014 9:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Reason.
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Date: 12/11/2014 5:01:00 AM
Lovely write Reason,verywitty, congrats on ur win!
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Date: 12/10/2014 10:49:00 AM
Wow! Wonder if another attempt will be made to birth a son! Very entertaining write, Reason. Congrats on your win. // paul
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Date: 12/10/2014 8:13:00 PM
Appreciate your comment. Thank you, Paul. glad to be the cause of your entertainment.
Date: 12/10/2014 8:17:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats Reason:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/10/2014 5:46:00 AM
I enjoyed your Cinkqu poem and happy to congratulate you on your win,Reason
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Date: 12/10/2014 8:12:00 PM
thank you, Dr. Ram, unusual form, the cinkqu.
Date: 11/8/2014 12:01:00 PM
Gosh Christmas would be an expensive one in that household - great write good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/12/2014 1:36:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, How those five girls must spoil that boy and do all the chores.

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