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The Language of Words

You come into my world a child of mine of heart and mind creation sweetly under my flair following my soul tracing my steps growing to a tremendous wealth encoding my particles. Soulless, dry lands under your sway strike gold. In tune with my aches you turn wild hearing my chuckles reposing your whole on my chest waiting for my muse to awake. Of my grip, now at liberty you outgrow my rooms claiming your fame a world of your own you set your very rules and truths pearls of wisdom you conceive collections you portray cruelties Love glorified Hate on the loose you shake minds, weaken hearts souls drift lose sight and shore Pain and joy you cause fear you strike spells you do break a sleeping beauty you enchant awake. Powerful and persuasive as you are you stir emotions to life and death your decipherer you bewitch and hypnotise Renowned for your feats of relief and healing I am into your world paradoxically under your flair you create my world! August 24th, 2018

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/3/2018 9:15:00 AM

Dear Besma, With your words you cast spells, with you poetry you create magic, by stringing them together you enhance our world, and through your posting them on poetry soup you inspire and instill a deep awakening of the soul! I bow to your wealth of words! Hugs Jennifer

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/4/2018 5:08:00 AM

My words are sometimes unable to write a reply! I just read and reread a beauty that brings a tremendous joy, value and veneration.. I keep rejoicing in such blessings and reward! You disabled my words with your generosity and humility.. you spread Love and peace.. my honour to have you on the paths of my heart and poetry dear Jennifer..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/4/2018 5:08:00 AM

the pleasure and the honour are mine to try to fashion a work of art and heart with a beautiful poetic soul. Love and hugs.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 10/8/2018 2:20:00 AM

Nice one.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/9/2018 8:51:00 AM

Thank you so much for your visit and comment. Best regards.

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/21/2018 7:39:00 PM

Definitely one of the finest free verse poems I have ever had the great pleasure to read my dear friend. You awe me with such massive talent heart, and poetic spirit! A fav.. a glistening gem !

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/23/2018 3:57:00 PM

Your feedback is one of the most cheering and rewarding comments I have ever received! None of my humble words can ascend to your ever glowing and outshining pearls of fine and outstanding words and poetry! Always my honour and great delight to read your beauties Robert. My deepest regards. Be blessed always.

Maria Williams

Date: 8/31/2018 6:40:00 AM

Absolutely wonderful dearest Besma, my words would pale into insignificance compared to what the others have just said. You are a wonderful poet on this Site, an inspiration to all. Your poetry is always faved by me.....Maria hugs

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/1/2018 9:58:00 AM

Oh dear Maria, so generous of you to spill these fine words on my humble poetry.. You are an ardent reader of magnificent work of art and beauty! Your words paint portraits of talent and wonder! Always a great pleasure to read your beauties and your lovely feedbacks.. stay always safe. My love and hugs.

Honesty Oimbo

Date: 8/27/2018 7:44:00 AM

I LIKE what i feel is restless flow of the poem. that restlessness in this poem makes it a great work of art

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/27/2018 8:01:00 AM

The ink flows when the soul is restless.. when questions are unanswered.. when beauty is unreachable.. when the thirst is unquenched.. Thank you so much for feeling my words! My honour and delight.. be blessed.

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/26/2018 2:55:00 PM

By your luscious poetic magic, your graceful heart and strumming soul, I am under the spell of your glorious word enchantment dearest Besma. The flair of your imagination mesmerizes me in ways that I deeply appreciate. Your breathtaking beauty radiates wonder, awe and respect for the realm of words and precious pearls of poetic creations. Your artistry is stunning in its spectacular power to captivate and persuade in all things of love, hate, wisdom, beauty and spirit my lovely friend. Your divine poetry endlessly enthralls this avid and ardent reader.. A FAV! Love, joy and warmest wishes to you my shining friend.. ~Susan

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/26/2018 3:37:00 PM

My words won't be enough to thank you for all the precious gems you offered me as a reward! My deepest regards, my love and hugs dear Susan. Stay safe and blessed always.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/26/2018 3:35:00 PM

Dear Susan, my words bow in veneration and gratitude.. my ink voices a soaring wow in fascination with your warm, tender and kind words.. You are my avid reader who grasped the core of my write.. you are a poetess of grandeur who masters the language of words.. you never cease to enchant and hypnotize your ardent reader! You are outshining!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/26/2018 2:27:00 PM

That was moving and absolutely beautiful. Very well penned.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/26/2018 3:12:00 PM

Thank you so much M.L Kiser for stopping by and appreciating my humble write! So much pleased and honoured. Be blessed.

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/26/2018 12:07:00 PM

You have a gift of language my friend...poetic in nature...the heavens hear you Besma...love & light...^WW^

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/26/2018 3:42:00 PM

So kind and generous of you Winged Warrior to praise my humble poetry in such sincere and poetic words! Thank you so much.. Be blessed always.

Silent One

Date: 8/26/2018 10:53:00 AM

Wow what an amazing poem and such great use of words here.. How lovely your child has this affect on you... It is important to let a child be a child and you have balanced that very well.. You are a great mother...

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/26/2018 11:22:00 AM

Good to see you Silent One! Thank you so much for your generous and elating feedback! I'm so much obliged for such a honourable visit and a gracious comment! Be blessed always.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/26/2018 8:39:00 AM

You certainly have a way with words, Besma! Nor everybody is gifted with the power of turning words into a chest of wealth. A pleasure to read your pearls of wisdom. ~ Warm regards // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/26/2018 9:18:00 AM

That's my very passion Paul.. the world of words never cease to amaze me.. I'm deeply grateful to your precious feedback! elevating and elating! Always my honour and pleasure.. Be blessed.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/25/2018 8:49:00 AM

Much to absorb an lavish within these luscious lines.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/25/2018 10:29:00 AM

I would like to thank you for your honourable visits and lovely and appreciative feedbacks.. My honour and pleasure Richard.. Be blessed always.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/25/2018 7:53:00 AM

Mystic insightful writing illuminating profound ideas that yearn to be expressed! A panoramic view of superb language that creates your world dearest, Besma! Superbly conceived and expressed!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/25/2018 10:26:00 AM

Reading your feedback dear Demetrios the philosopher, I'm very honoured, pleased and humbled.. I'm very glad you liked my write! A praising of high value to me! Thank you so much. Be blessed always.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/24/2018 3:00:00 PM

Your language of words is awesome my friend. So many precious lines in your poem..they are full of intensity and passion..your muse is certainly awake. Excellent poem, Besma.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/24/2018 4:35:00 PM

Precious are your visits and feedbacks dear Vijay! You are an avid reader with a heart of a poet! I do appreciate your generosity and constant support.. I'm deeply grateful for your praising words.. they cause a tremendous elation.. Thank you so much for the reward! Be blessed always.