Besma Riabi Dziri Poet Free verse

The Language of Words

You come into my world
a child of mine
of heart and mind creation
sweetly under my flair
following my soul
tracing my steps
growing to a tremendous wealth
encoding my particles.
Soulless, dry lands
under your sway
strike gold.
In tune with my aches
you turn wild hearing my chuckles
reposing your whole on my chest
waiting for my muse to awake.
Of my grip, now at liberty
you outgrow my rooms
claiming your fame
a world of your own
you set your very rules and truths
pearls of wisdom
you conceive collections
you portray cruelties
Love glorified
Hate on the loose
you shake minds, weaken hearts
souls drift
lose sight and shore
Pain and joy you cause
fear you strike
spells you do break
a sleeping beauty you enchant awake.
Powerful and persuasive as you are
you stir emotions to life and death
your decipherer you bewitch and hypnotise
Renowned for your feats of relief and healing
I am into your world
paradoxically under your flair
you create my world!

August 24th, 2018

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Jennifer Proxenos November 3, 2018 at 9:15 AM Dear Besma, With your words you cast spells, with you poetry you create magic, by stringing them together you enhance our world, and through your posting them on poetry soup you inspire and instill a deep awakening of the soul! I bow to your wealth of words! Hugs Jennifer Besma Riabi Dziri November 4, 2018 at 5:08 AM My words are sometimes unable to write a reply! I just read and reread a beauty that brings a tremendous joy, value and veneration.. I keep rejoicing in such blessings and reward! You disabled my words with your generosity and humility.. you spread Love and peace.. my honour to have you on the paths of my heart and poetry dear Jennifer.. Besma Riabi Dziri November 4, 2018 at 5:08 AM the pleasure and the honour are mine to try to fashion a work of art and heart with a beautiful poetic soul. Love and hugs.

Kai Michael Neumann October 8, 2018 at 2:20 AM Nice one. Besma Riabi Dziri October 9, 2018 at 8:51 AM Thank you so much for your visit and comment. Best regards.

Robert Lindley September 21, 2018 at 7:39 PM Definitely one of the finest free verse poems I have ever had the great pleasure to read my dear friend. You awe me with such massive talent heart, and poetic spirit! A fav.. a glistening gem ! Besma Riabi Dziri September 23, 2018 at 3:57 PM Your feedback is one of the most cheering and rewarding comments I have ever received! None of my humble words can ascend to your ever glowing and outshining pearls of fine and outstanding words and poetry! Always my honour and great delight to read your beauties Robert. My deepest regards. Be blessed always.

Maria Williams August 31, 2018 at 6:40 AM Absolutely wonderful dearest Besma, my words would pale into insignificance compared to what the others have just said. You are a wonderful poet on this Site, an inspiration to all. Your poetry is always faved by me.....Maria hugs Besma Riabi Dziri September 1, 2018 at 9:58 AM Oh dear Maria, so generous of you to spill these fine words on my humble poetry.. You are an ardent reader of magnificent work of art and beauty! Your words paint portraits of talent and wonder! Always a great pleasure to read your beauties and your lovely feedbacks.. stay always safe. My love and hugs.

Honesty Oimbo August 27, 2018 at 7:44 AM I LIKE what i feel is restless flow of the poem. that restlessness in this poem makes it a great work of art Besma Riabi Dziri August 27, 2018 at 8:01 AM The ink flows when the soul is restless.. when questions are unanswered.. when beauty is unreachable.. when the thirst is unquenched.. Thank you so much for feeling my words! My honour and delight.. be blessed.

Susan Ashley August 26, 2018 at 2:55 PM By your luscious poetic magic, your graceful heart and strumming soul, I am under the spell of your glorious word enchantment dearest Besma. The flair of your imagination mesmerizes me in ways that I deeply appreciate. Your breathtaking beauty radiates wonder, awe and respect for the realm of words and precious pearls of poetic creations. Your artistry is stunning in its spectacular power to captivate and persuade in all things of love, hate, wisdom, beauty and spirit my lovely friend. Your divine poetry endlessly enthralls this avid and ardent reader.. A FAV! Love, joy and warmest wishes to you my shining friend.. ~Susan Besma Riabi Dziri August 26, 2018 at 3:37 PM My words won't be enough to thank you for all the precious gems you offered me as a reward! My deepest regards, my love and hugs dear Susan. Stay safe and blessed always. Besma Riabi Dziri August 26, 2018 at 3:35 PM Dear Susan, my words bow in veneration and gratitude.. my ink voices a soaring wow in fascination with your warm, tender and kind words.. You are my avid reader who grasped the core of my write.. you are a poetess of grandeur who masters the language of words.. you never cease to enchant and hypnotize your ardent reader! You are outshining!

M. L. Kiser August 26, 2018 at 2:27 PM That was moving and absolutely beautiful. Very well penned. Besma Riabi Dziri August 26, 2018 at 3:12 PM Thank you so much M.L Kiser for stopping by and appreciating my humble write! So much pleased and honoured. Be blessed.

Winged Warrior August 26, 2018 at 12:07 PM You have a gift of language my friend...poetic in nature...the heavens hear you Besma...love & light...^WW^ Besma Riabi Dziri August 26, 2018 at 3:42 PM So kind and generous of you Winged Warrior to praise my humble poetry in such sincere and poetic words! Thank you so much.. Be blessed always.

Silent One August 26, 2018 at 10:53 AM Wow what an amazing poem and such great use of words here.. How lovely your child has this affect on you... It is important to let a child be a child and you have balanced that very well.. You are a great mother... Besma Riabi Dziri August 26, 2018 at 11:22 AM Good to see you Silent One! Thank you so much for your generous and elating feedback! I'm so much obliged for such a honourable visit and a gracious comment! Be blessed always.

Paul Callus August 26, 2018 at 8:39 AM You certainly have a way with words, Besma! Nor everybody is gifted with the power of turning words into a chest of wealth. A pleasure to read your pearls of wisdom. ~ Warm regards // paul Besma Riabi Dziri August 26, 2018 at 9:18 AM That's my very passion Paul.. the world of words never cease to amaze me.. I'm deeply grateful to your precious feedback! elevating and elating! Always my honour and pleasure.. Be blessed.

Richard Lamoureux August 25, 2018 at 8:49 AM Much to absorb an lavish within these luscious lines. Besma Riabi Dziri August 25, 2018 at 10:29 AM I would like to thank you for your honourable visits and lovely and appreciative feedbacks.. My honour and pleasure Richard.. Be blessed always.

Demetrios Trifiatis August 25, 2018 at 7:53 AM Mystic insightful writing illuminating profound ideas that yearn to be expressed! A panoramic view of superb language that creates your world dearest, Besma! Superbly conceived and expressed! Besma Riabi Dziri August 25, 2018 at 10:26 AM Reading your feedback dear Demetrios the philosopher, I'm very honoured, pleased and humbled.. I'm very glad you liked my write! A praising of high value to me! Thank you so much. Be blessed always.

Vijay Pandit August 24, 2018 at 3:00 PM Your language of words is awesome my friend. So many precious lines in your poem..they are full of intensity and passion..your muse is certainly awake. Excellent poem, Besma. Besma Riabi Dziri August 24, 2018 at 4:35 PM Precious are your visits and feedbacks dear Vijay! You are an avid reader with a heart of a poet! I do appreciate your generosity and constant support.. I'm deeply grateful for your praising words.. they cause a tremendous elation.. Thank you so much for the reward! Be blessed always.