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The Lane I Travel

A little far from the village and much far from the city, A ghetto in which many huts have no electricity; Full of beautiful fields, ponds, temples, all enchantingly glow, Around every path one finds obstinacy of buffalo; Cows, bulls, calves, sheep, goats, pigs, and poultry occupy each free space; Demand their space if I want to reach my place with godly grace... 17 September 2021 Bite Size Poem no21 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/1/2021 12:35:00 PM

Chris, congratulations on your win! This is uniquely creative with strong images and a underlying message to ponder. Blessings.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/4/2021 9:52:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Constance La France

Date: 10/1/2021 7:20:00 AM

Christuraj, wonderful and congratulations in your win in Line's contest, well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/1/2021 7:25:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Francis J Grasso

Date: 10/1/2021 6:26:00 AM

Congratulations, Christuraj. Well done! ...Fran

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/30/2021 10:14:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your HM, Christuraj:) enjoy:)

Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/30/2021 10:30:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/30/2021 4:54:00 PM

Interesting! Congratulations!

Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/30/2021 10:30:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Marilene Evans

Date: 9/30/2021 12:31:00 PM

Congratulations, there's always beauty is less is simple, as going back to simple life.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/30/2021 10:31:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/30/2021 12:28:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Your "The Lane I Travel" is a lovely story/write. I feel like I am there. Have a blessed day...................

Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/30/2021 10:31:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Constance La France

Date: 9/23/2021 1:40:00 PM

Christuraj, I enjoyed your poem, very nice ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/24/2021 8:50:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 9/20/2021 6:44:00 AM

This is exactly what I experienced as a child in India, and fell in love! it was short for me .. still now can't forget the simplicity, kindness, closeness, natural surrounding! Wish you all the best for the contest - your poems are heartfelt and touching! Love ~ Mala

Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/20/2021 10:56:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 9/19/2021 9:51:00 PM

Oh my, what a beautiful description of our dear rural India... that I LOVE so much... "beautiful fields, ponds.."....reminded me of my native village... you have used the right words to describe the lane you travel... I sincerely wish this to be placed high in the contest... Keep inspiring Chris... ~ Ani

Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/20/2021 12:28:00 AM

Thank you very much.