Christuraj Alex Poet Rhyme

The Lane I Travel

A little far from the village and much far from the city,
A ghetto in which many huts have no electricity;
Full of beautiful fields, ponds, temples, all enchantingly glow,
Around every path one finds obstinacy of buffalo;
Cows, bulls, calves, sheep, goats, pigs, and poultry occupy each free space;
Demand their space if I want to reach my place with godly grace...


17 September 2021 
Bite Size Poem no21 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Sam Kauffman October 1, 2021 at 12:35 PM Chris, congratulations on your win! This is uniquely creative with strong images and a underlying message to ponder. Blessings. Christuraj Alex October 4, 2021 at 9:52 AM Thank you very much.

Constance La France October 1, 2021 at 7:20 AM Christuraj, wonderful and congratulations in your win in Line's contest, well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance Christuraj Alex October 1, 2021 at 7:25 AM Thank you very much.

Francis J Grasso October 1, 2021 at 6:26 AM Congratulations, Christuraj. Well done! ...Fran

Joanna Daniel September 30, 2021 at 10:14 PM Back to congratulate you on your HM, Christuraj:) enjoy:) Christuraj Alex September 30, 2021 at 10:30 PM Thank you very much.

Kim Rodrigues September 30, 2021 at 4:54 PM Interesting! Congratulations! Christuraj Alex September 30, 2021 at 10:30 PM Thank you very much.

Marilene Evans September 30, 2021 at 12:31 PM Congratulations, there's always beauty is less is simple, as going back to simple life. Christuraj Alex September 30, 2021 at 10:31 PM Thank you very much.

Paula Goldsmith September 30, 2021 at 12:28 PM Congratulations on your win. Your "The Lane I Travel" is a lovely story/write. I feel like I am there. Have a blessed day................... Christuraj Alex September 30, 2021 at 10:31 PM Thank you very much.

Constance La France September 23, 2021 at 1:40 PM Christuraj, I enjoyed your poem, very nice ~ peace and tranquility _Constance Christuraj Alex September 24, 2021 at 8:50 AM Thank you very much.

Malabika Ray Choudhury September 20, 2021 at 6:44 AM This is exactly what I experienced as a child in India, and fell in love! it was short for me .. still now can't forget the simplicity, kindness, closeness, natural surrounding! Wish you all the best for the contest - your poems are heartfelt and touching! Love ~ Mala Christuraj Alex September 20, 2021 at 10:56 AM Thank you very much.

Anitha Jayasankar September 19, 2021 at 9:51 PM Oh my, what a beautiful description of our dear rural India... that I LOVE so much... "beautiful fields, ponds.."....reminded me of my native village... you have used the right words to describe the lane you travel... I sincerely wish this to be placed high in the contest... Keep inspiring Chris... ~ Ani Christuraj Alex September 20, 2021 at 12:28 AM Thank you very much.

Edward Ibeh September 17, 2021 at 11:13 AM Wonderfully written, Christuraj:-) Wow, they sure take charge of the road, don't they? The imagery is so vivid! Christuraj Alex September 17, 2021 at 11:16 AM Thank you very much.

Supraja Kannan September 17, 2021 at 3:37 AM How beautifully described!!! Could see the lane through these words... Enjoyed reading it... Christuraj Alex September 17, 2021 at 4:09 AM Thank you very much

Joanna Daniel September 17, 2021 at 1:59 AM Beautifully described the paths of rural India, Christuraj:) Christuraj Alex September 17, 2021 at 4:09 AM Thank you very much.

Mahtab Bangalee September 16, 2021 at 11:12 PM nice written; with the grace of God let;s we earn the goal