The Land of Nane

The Land of Nane

Once upon a long, long, L O N G time ago
Far, F A A A R R away...an island 'rose
Out of an icy blue and crystal sea...
Far north of Africa. Far north of Spain. 
Far north of Scotland, France, and the Ukraine. 

And in this land, all things once lost would go:
All things taken...All things stolen...All woes...
Hidden in the Valley of Hopes...to be
Safe...awaiting being found...loved again,
Among the blue poppies...under the Wain. 

And when the Sun would go to sleep, you know
The Moon would wake and watch each one of those
Things once lost, now gone, from you and me. 
All the fireflies. All the whooping crane. 
All the crickets, frogs, and the mass vervain 

Would All dance and sing beneath the Moon's glow
To help watch over the lost, (so it goes). 
There in the valley, it never does rain
And All things are safe...and never feel pain. 

Faeries and dragonflies sparkle and glow. 
The wind smells like Jasmine...warmly it blows. 
Barefooted blue beetles walk fast, three by three
Keeping All good thoughts on track like a train,
And whistle a song, (without a refrain). 

All good dreams are true. All butterflies...blue. 
All flowers and trees, each one, are blue, too. 
The hills are covered in green cotton grass,
And puffy, pink clouds All speak, as they pass. 
Sparkling blue waterfalls...sipped in a cup,
Makes you feel happy...you'll never give up!

So when something's taken...or lost... just know
That it's in a place where all magic grows,
And waits safe and happy for you and me. 
In the Valley of Hopes...they each remain...
Close your eyes...Sweet dreams...in the Land of Nane. 


2.28.2017©deborah burch 


Notes: 
Wain is a seven star constellation in Ursa Major. 
Vervain is plants, flowers, etc. 
Nane was made up until I googled it and found it means: "God has favored me; [and also] nice"
I'm going to call this form: verse, until I either find what it is or name it/created myself...

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Date: 3/14/2017 6:09:00 AM
Thank you for commenting on my story Deb and also congratulations to you on your win. There have been some great tales in this competition.
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Date: 3/13/2017 7:06:00 PM
Congratulation on your win, Deborah , I want to thank you for entering my contest. I love this very imaginative write ... Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/8/2017 10:46:00 AM
A good write that shows much imagination. But I must be having a strange day, because all I could think of is: "So that's where the lost sock always goes."
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/8/2017 10:12:00 PM
Lol! I'm still laughing at your comment! :)
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/8/2017 11:21:00 AM
Bahahaha!!!:) You're so funny! I think socks may have an entire other place! ;) but that's another tale. Big Hugggs David and thank you
Date: 3/8/2017 6:34:00 AM
Yet another masterpiece from a role model. This is just awwwwwwww... What a beautiful share...
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/8/2017 11:21:00 AM
Thank you so much Funom. :)
Date: 3/4/2017 12:08:00 PM
A very fanciful write. Enjoyable reading.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/8/2017 11:21:00 AM
Thank you Robert!! :)
Date: 3/2/2017 12:11:00 PM
What a wonderful, enchanting and magical tale you have created for us Deb. This is a very special piece that you should be very proud of. Nicely done my friend.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/2/2017 5:11:00 PM
Thank you so very much Chris. You are wonderfully kind. :) big hugs, deb
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