The Land of Lip Service

Either
          a searing indictment of
   contemporary American society
                            or
                just a bit of fun!


They seem to have forgotten 
common courtesy, 'Have a Nice Day!' 
rings so hollow, it's a shame;
they're mired in mediocrity and 
no one ever, ever takes the blame. 

Overweight and under-nourished, 
over-sexed and under-intellectual, 
they preen and pose their way to self-
importance, perpetually ineffectual.   
      
They clutch desperately on to their 
perceptions, their DVD's and plasma 
TV screens; they're rushing blindly 
to the brink of self-destruction, never 
caring for a moment what life means.

I think I'll have a cup of tea and read 
Jane Austen, self-righteous, showing 
smug English reserve, and laugh at all 
their cheesy indiscretions while I weigh 
their unimaginable nerve!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/17/2016 8:33:00 PM
Hilarious! Love it!
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 4/18/2016 12:50:00 PM
Thanks Chris... much appreciated. Keith
Date: 3/6/2016 6:59:00 PM
Not at all my friend! I think everyone needs to make fun of themselves now and then, anyway :)
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Date: 3/6/2016 1:25:00 AM
When I visited Wales to visit some family there (and when they visited the states) it DID make me realize how we Americans really seem to love small talk, and cheesy greetings in nearly every store. Though you talk about the place I live, I can't help but agree with most of all of your points ... we are quite shallow in our technological distractions, and many words (but little thought) communicated in our interactions. Well expressed with a tinge of sarcastic humor.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 3/6/2016 2:17:00 PM
I hope I didn't offend my American friends! It really was tongue-in-cheek... Thank you my friend. Best wishes, Keith
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