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The Land of Aubergine

Brief: The Land of Aubergine I search for the land of Aubergine Where the Egg Plant is nurtured and raised Pods of Byzantium Airships Succulence with a Periwinkle glaze 4/7/17

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John Hamilton

Date: 7/15/2017 7:57:00 PM

This is so full of imagery, nice word aubergine, eggplant in french no? Nice win Kevin!

Alyssa Lorette

Date: 7/15/2017 11:24:00 AM

Beautiful poem, Kevin! Congratulations for winning 2nd place! :)

Kevin Shaw
Date: 7/15/2017 5:05:00 PM

Thanks Alyssa Regards, Kevin x

Jan Allison

Date: 7/15/2017 5:32:00 AM

what a fabulous description of aubergine - really enjoyed this descriptive poem:-) hugs jan xx

Kevin Shaw
Date: 7/15/2017 7:02:00 AM

Thank you Jan, you are so kind, Kevin xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/14/2017 9:53:00 PM

I love your creative description of this wonderful delicious plant! It is a nightshade and I can't eat it anymore because of that. It makes my arthritic knees flare up, but I sure do miss it in my diet. Your last two lines are simply brilliant! Congratulations on your high placement Kevin!

Kevin Shaw
Date: 7/15/2017 7:04:00 AM

Thank you Connie for your nice comments, to be honest I have never tried Aubergine, but I love the word and I love the colour, kind regards Kevin x

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/14/2017 8:59:00 PM

I loved this! Vivid images and humorous! Congrats on second place in my contest, Kevin!

Kevin Shaw
Date: 7/15/2017 7:09:00 AM

Hello Kim, many thanks for my second place in your contest. I like to write poems that are easy to read, invoke images without necessarily saying anything. Poetry is great fun and for me liberating, Kind regards from Huddersfield in Yorkshire, Kevin xx

Funom Makama

Date: 7/12/2017 10:04:00 AM

Excellent and profound. You have that unique skill of beating the peak. This is a wonderful stuff, always beating our expectation. Can wait to jump to your next page.