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The Land Mines of Love

Stroll through the land mines of love Steer clear of a vial of perfume Swerve 'round a leopard-skin thong Blush at the ruby two-lip blooms Stroll through the land mines of lust Remove all your clothes if you must Your pulse races, palms sweat to death Lie down in these pastures ~ Hold onto your breath

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 6/2/2021 3:05:00 AM
"remove all your clothes if you must" - this made me laugh.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/2/2021 5:30:00 PM
Ooh! You laughed. I got excited. ~ Bug-eyed
Date: 5/27/2021 1:36:00 PM
Leopard skin thong, we need more Gershon lol Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/27/2021 3:53:00 PM
Next stanza, which I had to leave out, the leopard took those spots off the thong -- and that teeny-tiny thong was 'barely' visible. lol. Thanks, Tom
Date: 5/27/2021 12:38:00 PM
A risqué write of passage GW! The read is almost a PSA!! Happy Thursday!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/27/2021 3:52:00 PM
OK, I admit that I had to look up PSA... and now I thank you, Mike, for an uproariously funny comment. Made my day. ~ Still laughing, gw
Date: 5/26/2021 7:05:00 PM
Love or lust, hmmmm, both can make your heart race :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/26/2021 8:32:00 PM
They sure can. This is the kind of 'racism' that's ok too. ~ Love and Flowers, gw
Date: 5/26/2021 7:02:00 PM
Hmmm...it has been a long time, but your directions are pretty good, GW.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/27/2021 3:51:00 PM
Shirley tells me that I never jest. lol. ~ Clowning around
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/26/2021 8:40:00 PM
Surely you jest!!!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/26/2021 8:32:00 PM
Just don't take the 'd' off of directions, Milt. How could I resist that one?! ~ Bawdy Boy

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