The Lamentation Over the Dead Christ

Michelangelo covered with the hood
Weeping tears as holding Christ, he stood
At the head of the man, who is the Lamb
That became the perfect sacrifice, the great I Am

Putting himself in Joseph of Arimathea's place
Helping Mary Magdalene and Mary Jesus' mother face
The tragedy, that they felt ended Jesus' race
His chance to be the Savior, sent to grace
 
The world with salvation and kingdom of love;
How each stroke of the hammer guided from above
Perfection of this work you desired for the Dove
When an error occured, you were not proud of

Gave this unfinished work away (to Antonio)
Who for a profit did sell the work for pay
Reconstruction by Tiberio Calcagni paved the way
For the look of the Florence Pieta' today




(The information that I got about this work said that Michelangelo used himself as a model 
for the hooded figure.  I could just see Michelangelo feeling the agony of the person when he 
put himself in their place.)
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Thomas Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 6:25 AM
Wonderful entry for Raul's contest, Sara, and good luck! I too think that Michelangelo surely envisioned himself as part of the image so that he could more deeply feel the emotions that he produced so beautifully in the sculpture ~Juliane
Brown Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 6:56 AM
The Christmas season seems to bring out such brilliant poetry from all the poets here at PoetrySoup making you all ~~~Poet Extraordinaires~~~. I thank you for sharing your poetry with us all through the year Sara. Love, Carol
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December 7, 2009 at 1:13 PM
Magnificent and good luck in Raul's contest.. this is surely a winnder already with your words so eloquent and touching... u have captured the photo.. and sculpture.. blessings... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Sheart Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 9:14 AM
Sara, a lovely Quatrain and your rhyme here gives this poem a gentle flow. The story line is facinating, truly enjoyed. Keep writing! Love Light Patty
Shango Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 6:52 AM
It was his way to make himself the center of the Western history ... and for this fought with DaVinci, and gave us his image also as Christ ... genius must have its difference. Great write ... and all the best if you entered the competition.
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December 7, 2009 at 5:09 AM
interesting read today, check grammar
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