The Lady Took My Heart

You took my heart my soul my whole
Like the best feline cat burglar you stole
You have  bewitched me, entranced   me
I’m under your spell and all at sea

 Like the best feline cat burglar you stole
 The love I gave you, I’ve lost all control
 I’m under your spell and all at sea
 That’s what a sweet heart like you does to me

 The love I gave you, I’ve lost all control
 You have  bewitched me, entranced  me
 That’s what a sweet heart like you does to me
 You took my heart my soul my whole
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kendrick Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 1:38 PM
Good rhyme, metaphors, and idea for a pantoum which are not so easy to write..Great work..Sara
Pennell  Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 3:02 PM
thank you sara
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