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The Lady Took My Heart

You took my heart my soul my whole Like the best feline cat burglar you stole You have bewitched me, entranced me I’m under your spell and all at sea Like the best feline cat burglar you stole The love I gave you, I’ve lost all control I’m under your spell and all at sea That’s what a sweet heart like you does to me The love I gave you, I’ve lost all control You have bewitched me, entranced me That’s what a sweet heart like you does to me You took my heart my soul my whole

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Date: 1/12/2018 1:38:00 PM
Good rhyme, metaphors, and idea for a pantoum which are not so easy to write..Great work..Sara
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 1/12/2018 3:02:00 PM
thank you sara

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