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The Lady In Black

Smoke comes off the chimney tops Trails behind the breeze as the rain drops Hurdles under the clouds to seek shelter Disappears in the vapor of a darkest winter Snapped under my coat I ran to shelter My steps tracing the trail of glass Sweat dripped down my palms elevated I lift my knees and walk agitated Took a second to notice, a scarf hanging Neck loose, head bottled, scalp dangling Cold breath sneaked up and down my neck As the lady grasped sight of her final dread My gaze slid under her skirt Her undone hair and bloody shirt All climbed to intertwine juxtaposed above Merciless, spineless, slithering gloves Ice-clawed eyes stared back in horror Hands clenched in fists flagrant in color Put a finger on his lips and whispered A tone that struck my nerves unhindered Speak a word and you're next Don't put my patience to the test Walk away, disappear, 'cause if I find you You'll pray that god take you before I do I couldn't hesitate twice abt walking Suddenly, he cringed and started falling Branches broke as his neck followed behind Snapping backwards, dispersing his spine I slowly walked over and found a note To whom it may concern, sloppy hands wrote I am but a victim, of this woman's throat the day she stabbed me, the day she spoke I'm but a lonely spirit roaming free Why has this lady followed me To murder all that I loved and once cared for To sweep off the little things I'd die for She was Lady Death, the one we all fear Seductively laying us to eternal rest Drove me to heaven, doors slid clear Her arms wide open, her warm loving chest Then to hell I went for my earthly deeds The torture I've seen for all those years And you're next in a line of slaves A queue of misery, a farm of graves Your eyes have seen a deadly charm Life as you know it is far long gone Prepare for a sinfully long run Here she comes, load your gun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/2/2014 7:34:00 AM
Ziad, why I find it hard to be understood? Maybe I need to read it more and more, or someone will help me and explain, so I won't ask anymore... It must be one of your powerful poems.. I will learn many things from your amazing style! Blackmatta
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Ziad Gadou
Date: 9/3/2014 2:58:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words! Hope it wasn't too ambiguous xD
Date: 7/23/2014 5:55:00 PM
Ziad :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/23/2014 4:34:00 AM
A really harrowing piece this is. I can make a good short film...... :-)
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Ziad Gadou
Date: 7/24/2014 9:05:00 PM
appreciate the time! please let me know if you do haha :D
Date: 7/23/2014 4:12:00 AM
wow that gave me the creeps , it took me right there, what a good job
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Ziad Gadou
Date: 7/24/2014 9:04:00 PM
thank you very much! :D
Date: 7/7/2014 8:19:00 PM
Ziad,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Ziad Gadou
Date: 7/8/2014 3:39:00 AM
thanks for stopping by! :D
Date: 7/6/2014 3:04:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Ziad. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Ziad Gadou
Date: 7/8/2014 3:31:00 AM
will do definitely!
Date: 7/5/2014 7:07:00 AM
I loved it. The lady of our sorrows, always making us squirm and about to bite the dust. You depicted her quite masterfully.
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Date: 7/3/2014 4:50:00 AM
A dark lurid poem written in excellent literary skills and words! So amazing, chilling. Pls do review my latest poem too.
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Ziad Gadou
Date: 7/4/2014 6:14:00 PM
just read it, love the message, wonderful writing :D thank you for your time to check my work!
Date: 7/3/2014 4:26:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup
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Ziad Gadou
Date: 7/4/2014 6:16:00 PM
thank you very much!
Date: 7/2/2014 9:13:00 PM
Ziad,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Ziad Gadou
Date: 7/4/2014 6:19:00 PM
thank you for taking the time to read my work! :D
Date: 7/2/2014 11:39:00 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
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Ziad Gadou
Date: 7/4/2014 6:16:00 PM
thank you for your time! :D
Date: 7/2/2014 8:18:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Ziad :) - I choose your first great written poem- I like it ! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. -// Anne-Lise :)
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Ziad Gadou
Date: 7/4/2014 6:18:00 PM
thank you very much and i will definitely keep your advice in mind :D
Date: 7/2/2014 1:56:00 AM
Hi Ziad, congratulations on a great write - I really enjoyed reading this poem! Well done!
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Ziad Gadou
Date: 7/4/2014 6:19:00 PM
thank you for taking the time! :D

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