The Lady In Black

Smoke comes off the chimney tops
Trails behind the breeze as the rain drops
Hurdles under the clouds to seek shelter
Disappears in the vapor of a darkest winter

Snapped under my coat I ran to shelter
My steps tracing the trail of glass
Sweat dripped down my palms elevated
I lift my knees and walk agitated

Took a second to notice, a scarf hanging
Neck loose, head bottled, scalp dangling
Cold breath sneaked up and down my neck
As the lady grasped sight of her final dread

My gaze slid under her skirt
Her undone hair and bloody shirt
All climbed to intertwine juxtaposed above
Merciless, spineless, slithering gloves

Ice-clawed eyes stared back in horror
Hands clenched in fists flagrant in color
Put a finger on his lips and whispered
A tone that struck my nerves unhindered

Speak a word and you're next
Don't put my patience to the test
Walk away, disappear, 'cause if I find you
You'll pray that god take you before I do

I couldn't hesitate twice abt walking
Suddenly, he cringed and started falling
Branches broke as his neck followed behind
Snapping backwards, dispersing his spine

I slowly walked over and found a note
To whom it may concern, sloppy hands wrote
I am but a victim, of this woman's throat
the day she stabbed me, the day she spoke

I'm but a lonely spirit roaming free
Why has this lady followed me
To murder all that I loved and once cared for
To sweep off the little things I'd die for

She was Lady Death,  the one we all fear
Seductively laying us to eternal rest
Drove me to heaven, doors slid clear
Her arms wide open, her warm loving chest

Then to hell I went for my earthly deeds
The torture I've seen for all those years
And you're next in a line of slaves
A queue of misery, a farm of graves

Your eyes have seen a deadly charm
Life as you know it is far long gone
Prepare for a sinfully long run
Here she comes, load your gun
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Matta Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 7:34 AM
Ziad, why I find it hard to be understood? Maybe I need to read it more and more, or someone will help me and explain, so I won't ask anymore... It must be one of your powerful poems.. I will learn many things from your amazing style! Blackmatta
Gadou Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 2:58 PM
Thank you for your kind words! Hope it wasn't too ambiguous xD
A   Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 5:55 PM
Ziad :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~
Kimathi Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 4:34 AM
A really harrowing piece this is. I can make a good short film...... :-)
Gadou Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 9:05 PM
appreciate the time! please let me know if you do haha :D
Ferguson Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 4:12 AM
wow that gave me the creeps , it took me right there, what a good job
Gadou Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 9:04 PM
thank you very much! :D
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July 7, 2014 at 8:19 PM
Ziad,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Gadou Avatar
July 8, 2014 at 3:39 AM
thanks for stopping by! :D
Gibson Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 3:04 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Ziad. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
Gadou Avatar
July 8, 2014 at 3:31 AM
will do definitely!
Dragonwings Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 7:07 AM
I loved it. The lady of our sorrows, always making us squirm and about to bite the dust. You depicted her quite masterfully.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 4:50 AM
A dark lurid poem written in excellent literary skills and words! So amazing, chilling. Pls do review my latest poem too.
Gadou Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 6:14 PM
just read it, love the message, wonderful writing :D thank you for your time to check my work!
Pen Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 4:26 AM
Welcome to poetry soup
Gadou Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 6:16 PM
thank you very much!
A   Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 9:13 PM
Ziad,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Gadou Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 6:19 PM
thank you for taking the time to read my work! :D
Hyler Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 11:39 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
Gadou Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 6:16 PM
thank you for your time! :D
Andresen Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 8:18 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Ziad :) - I choose your first great written poem- I like it ! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. -// Anne-Lise :)
Gadou Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 6:18 PM
thank you very much and i will definitely keep your advice in mind :D
Ayala Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 1:56 AM
Hi Ziad, congratulations on a great write - I really enjoyed reading this poem! Well done!
Gadou Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 6:19 PM
thank you for taking the time! :D
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