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The Lady in Black

She came to visit me and I laid out for her the most beautiful black dress She went into the private chambers and put the black dress on along with a set of diamond earrings and necklace From here I would whisk her away to a private dinner by candlelight We would have lobster and shrimp with mixed vegetables and corn and some mashed potatoes too She ate with manners complete and ask to pause dinner for a romantic dance as the grand piano played I took her in my arms and I whispered I will love you forever and a day From there we had a light dessert and some chocolate and chatted softly amongst true loves We strolled on out to the beach and watched the shooting stars and commented on the moons of Jupiter and the rings of Saturn The constellations were our friends. And then we touched and kissed her lips tasted like raspberries and cream and her skin was as soft as cotton I would say the story ends here but you are too innocent to hear the rest as movements were in sync with the fireworks above

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Date: 11/8/2024 12:41:00 PM
Dear robert, beautiful and so touching how youv captured a moment with your beloved, or maybe fictional but either way youv set an ambience that is romantic and flows with love and light, so heartfelt! I especially loved the lines “ I took her in my arms and I whispered I will love you forever and a day“ awwn thats so sweet! And the ending is brilliant ! Made me smile! Too innocent for fireworks! Pleasure always reading your poems, sending you light always~
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Date: 11/8/2024 12:21:00 PM
Robert, beautifully penned , Constance
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Date: 11/7/2024 5:11:00 PM
It sounds like true love. Beware the raspberries and cream lips. It may be a trick of flavored lip gloss. This was a good read for those of us who enjoy the softness of romance after a chaotic day.
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Date: 11/7/2024 1:26:00 PM
Inspired by the Uriah Heep song?
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