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The Lady Down the Lane

Approximately twenty years ago I met the lady down the lane. I’d see her once a month, and well I got to know this lady whom my church assigned to me. Each woman’s duty in my church it was to visit other sisters – just a few- to make sure they were doing fine because it was a helpful Christian thing to do. “My lady” was the term I liked to use referring to this woman twenty years my senior. In my visits, we’d amuse ourselves with tales of children and careers. She’d had a lot of kids and they were spread from California to the great midwest. For more than fifty years she had been wed, and now with many grandkids she was blessed. A journalist she’d been – so sharp; so kind! Things changed. She disappeared from down the lane. Five years ago, dementia stole her mind. “My lady’s” tales I’d never hear again. Dedicated to my friend, Sister Marcella Walker. May she rest in peace. March 23, 2020 for "The Lady Down the Lane" Contest of Craig Cornish

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Date: 3/26/2020 6:25:00 PM
what a beautiful poem to honor your friend... dementia is a cruel disease...I have seen some in it's grasps... good write, best wishes in the contest! stay safe... hugs and blessings!
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Date: 3/26/2020 12:34:00 PM
What a touching story Andrea. It sends a message for us all to be kind and loving to each other because we might not be able to see that person again. great stuff. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/26/2020 6:15:00 AM
Great story. An important tribute. Take care, Kai
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Date: 3/25/2020 1:00:00 AM
Thanks for sharing those memories.. Great write.. Good luck in the contest Andrea..
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Date: 3/24/2020 9:47:00 PM
Knowing your history, I believe this to be true - every stanza I think came from your memory/heart and shared a bit of you, something I love when it happens. This is delightful and, as we say on Soup, well-written. Good luck in the contest and all else. Love, CayCay
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Date: 3/24/2020 7:22:00 PM
Hi Andrea: I can relate. I met a guy on the bus and he was veterans of the Vietnam war. he hd some beautiful tales to tell.After awhile he was gone. He left a question mark in my psyche. I loved your poem!
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Date: 3/24/2020 4:33:00 PM
It is so sad to lose someone this way. A great entry for the contest Andrea. Stay safe. xxoo
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Date: 3/24/2020 10:34:00 AM
So sad what dementia does to the best of us. A very moving contest entry, Andrea! Good luck and stay safe/healthy! :) gw
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Date: 3/24/2020 9:10:00 AM
Andrea, You've brought to light another disease that takes so many good people from this world. Bless them in these times. -Richard
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Date: 3/24/2020 8:43:00 AM
A touching write, Andrea. Beautifully written. Good luck in the contest...
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Date: 3/23/2020 10:34:00 PM
True stories are always the sad ones, love how you have woven this in to wonderful poetry...Stay Safe Andrea.
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Date: 3/23/2020 10:04:00 PM
A somber end to this story of goodwill, Very nicely penned Andrea, stay safe..hugs
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Date: 3/23/2020 6:02:00 PM
Hi Andrea, this is a beautiful tribute to your friend. You must have some wonderful stories stored within your memory. You always make your rhyme sing Andrea. Wishing you well in the contest. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 3/23/2020 5:15:00 PM
So beautifully expressed in your poignant, flowing rhyme, Andrea. Yo do that so well - so masterfully! Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 3/23/2020 3:00:00 PM
My Lady lived a fruitful life...Enjoyed the read
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Date: 3/23/2020 11:50:00 AM
A glowing tribute to your friend Andrea. You still have those fond memories of chats you used to have with her. Tom
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Date: 3/23/2020 10:23:00 AM
I love when I get to be your first commenter, my friend! Your words flow so smoothly as I'm sure your conversations with Sister Marcella used to. This is a beautiful tribute to a saint and friend who was a living testament to what the church should be in our community: an outreach of friendship, connection, kindness. Your talent for IP and rhyme are on lovely display in this write. LOVE this! ~ John
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