Raul Moreno Poet Concrete

The Ladder of Success

D            E
E  HOPE  D  
S            U
I  LOVE   C
R            A
E  WISH  T
$             I
K  PLAN   O
N             N
O  GOAL   $
W            D
L   FAIL    R
E             E
D  DARE   A
G             M
E   LIVE    S
?              ?

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September 19, 2009 at 3:29 PM Good presentation--the shape works well to convey your message. Creative! Karen

Elizabeth Neal March 24, 2009 at 7:32 PM Great shape, and nice message. Love E.

Tyler Martin March 23, 2009 at 11:24 PM Cool ladder, constructed nicely out of words, very clever. Tyler

Daniel Neal March 12, 2009 at 2:47 PM Whoa, nice ladder, each step is nice, one must fail in order to succeed. Great write.

Robin L. Gass March 9, 2009 at 1:42 PM This is so wonderfully creative, Raul. The words of wisdom and the format work beautifully together! A great piece, my talented friend! Love, Robin

Frank F. Atanacio March 7, 2009 at 9:00 AM freaking clever the ladder to success in such difficult times :)

Brian Strand March 6, 2009 at 8:09 AM Inspiring words and picture Raul.Very inventive.Rgds Brian

Arany P. March 6, 2009 at 4:57 AM yes the ladder i m climbing now... cleverly used the form!! ~ Arany

Sharon Winter March 6, 2009 at 4:55 AM So creative Raul! I am loving this! Excellent! Love, Shar

Laurie Ginn March 6, 2009 at 3:44 AM What a fun poem, great form Raul and of course truth.

Kevin Mcallion March 6, 2009 at 3:40 AM I've never seen a poem like this before. Loved it. Very innovative and creative

Kristin Reynolds March 6, 2009 at 3:10 AM Keep on reaching for the stars, that's my goal - never ever give up!!! Sweet ladder, Raul, Kristin