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The Ladder of Success

D E E HOPE D S U I LOVE C R A E WISH T $ I K PLAN O N N O GOAL $ W D L FAIL R E E D DARE A G M E LIVE S ? ?

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Date: 9/19/2009 3:29:00 PM

Good presentation--the shape works well to convey your message. Creative! Karen

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 3/24/2009 7:32:00 PM

Great shape, and nice message. Love E.

Tyler Martin

Date: 3/23/2009 11:24:00 PM

Cool ladder, constructed nicely out of words, very clever. Tyler

Daniel Neal

Date: 3/12/2009 2:47:00 PM

Whoa, nice ladder, each step is nice, one must fail in order to succeed. Great write.

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/9/2009 1:42:00 PM

This is so wonderfully creative, Raul. The words of wisdom and the format work beautifully together! A great piece, my talented friend! Love, Robin

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 3/7/2009 9:00:00 AM

freaking clever the ladder to success in such difficult times :)

Brian Strand

Date: 3/6/2009 8:09:00 AM

Inspiring words and picture Raul.Very inventive.Rgds Brian

Arany P.

Date: 3/6/2009 4:57:00 AM

yes the ladder i m climbing now... cleverly used the form!! ~ Arany

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/6/2009 4:55:00 AM

So creative Raul! I am loving this! Excellent! Love, Shar

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/6/2009 3:44:00 AM

What a fun poem, great form Raul and of course truth.

Kevin Mcallion

Date: 3/6/2009 3:40:00 AM

I've never seen a poem like this before. Loved it. Very innovative and creative

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 3/6/2009 3:10:00 AM

Keep on reaching for the stars, that's my goal - never ever give up!!! Sweet ladder, Raul, Kristin