The Kosher Dill Pickle

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There once was a man who loved garlic dill
Holding them in his hand gave him a thrill
Doorknobs are fermented
With garlic tormented
His wallet and all of his precious bills

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Indiana Shaw

Date: 9/11/2021 4:15:00 AM

Some husbands, or the likes need designating to the outshed along with their flamin' Kosher dill pickles, just saying, he, he, he . . . ; )

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/11/2021 6:44:00 AM

Indiana, I never thought about it until now but maybe I need to put those dill pickles in his refrigerator in the shop so he can eat his fill while out there but then the doorknob on the back door would be fermented. LOL..Thanks for your visit. I appreciate the nice review. Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 7/26/2018 11:07:00 AM

LOL, had a chuckle at this

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/11/2021 6:42:00 AM

Thank you, Jack. I am glad you got a laugh. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2018 5:33:00 PM

Ha. what a good one, Sarah.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/26/2018 5:35:00 PM

Andrea, Thanks for the kind comment. I hope you got a chuckle. Sara

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 6/8/2018 11:42:00 AM

Hello Sara! Garlic and kosher dills are a favorite of mine. Keep mine in my mouth, forget my wallet. Good to hear from you, and prat you are doing well. Best to you in all your endeavors. / M

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/8/2018 5:59:00 PM

Maurice, Life is good but sometimes I am not but we all make mistakes. My health remains stable as of this minute but we don't know what the future holds. I appreciate you stopping by and taking time to comment. My husband loves those garlic dill pickles but he gets the scent onto everything he touches and it doesn't clean up very well seems to linger. LOL.. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/31/2018 12:42:00 PM

- The taste is like butt ... everyone is different - Lovely humor, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/31/2018 1:02:00 PM

SS, Well I haven't tasted butt but I guess the scent of dirty behind could be compared to a garlic dill. LOL..Thanks for dropping by. Your presence is appreciate. Sara

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 5/31/2018 7:24:00 AM

Giggles ;) xomo!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/31/2018 7:58:00 AM

Maureen, Thanks for dropping by. Glad that you got a giggle from my work. The scent of the garlic all over everything in the house is not pleasant though. Sara