The Knock of Improbablity (Part 1)

Sitting peacefully, I lay motionless on the deck of my ship
I hear the birds chirping low and the waves put me to sleep
They rock me back and forth as my mother in past did
I feel her presence as the birds fly overhead, they are my herd

As the border of sleep and reality sets in
I hear a distant knocking on the ships deck 
My eyes drift slowly open but nothing is seen
The birds overhead motion me back to sleep

The birds chirp turns into dogs bark as I drift into dream
I see my childhood pet, my best friend play in the leaves
She looks up at me and opens her mouth
What comes out is not bark but a knocking on the ships deck

I escape from my dream my eyes open wide
This time I heard it closer though coming from behind
I look around to see if anything is there
But alas the birds are the only thing that stare

As I fall back into the realm of pretend
The same knocking though from hell is louder in my ear
My eyes open wider as the light escaped with fear
The knock is gone away but my heart beats up so near

I cant sleep no for when I try that knock comes from her
Is it the ship or worse yet does that knock come from here?
I point to my mind though a game has been played
I point to my soul as it shivers now in pain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007



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Date: 5/16/2011 5:35:00 PM
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Congratulations on your featured write this week Penn. Love, Carol
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