The Knock

So sick and cold I lay in the bed,
As old and feeble I loll there tired,
Sprawling on the bed a knock was heard,
So tiny but clear I heard that sound.

With much difficulty I woke from the bed,
Walked to the door with much animosity,
With futility the door was opened,
Seeing nobody, I mourned and returned.

Again I heard the same little knock,
Again I jumped and plod to the door,
Again the door was opened in vain,
Again came back mourning to the bed.

This continues for so many times,
Till I found the reason for the knock,
Knock was not at the door, I fancied,
The truth is in my beating little heart.

Like the knock that which we searched outside,
Searching the God, in hill and dale,
He is searched in books and heaven,
And searching him in temples and churches.

At last the search will be completed in vain,
And come back to there from where we started,
Then we sure will realize the truth 
That, I'm he and he is I.


Date of Entry : 29/02/2020
Contest Entered :STRAND CHOICE A,any form,any theme
Date contest judged : 09/04/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kannan Avatar
March 2, 2020 at 10:23 AM
Such a meaningful poem with a great message. Beautifully written.
Somadas Avatar
March 2, 2020 at 11:50 AM
Thank you so much Supraja..
Roper Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 1:33 PM
Great inspirational verse, Jenish. I'm he and he is I. Hugs Eve
Somadas Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 9:23 PM
You carry the essence of that poem..Thank you..
Wolf Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 1:06 PM
He sends us signals and messages; if we are listening, we will receive them. If we are smart, we will accept them. ~ Gershoni
Somadas Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 9:22 PM
You are sending wonderful messages now..I'm listening and accepting.. Thank you Gershon..
Sands Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 12:59 PM
God does reach us in this way you describe. Very well written. Great insight and ability to convey :)
Somadas Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 9:10 PM
Thank you Heidi for that motivating words..
One Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 11:10 AM
Deep personal writes are ways the best....enjoyed this.
Somadas Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 9:10 PM
Thank you for your support...
Trifiatis Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 3:52 AM
Truth to be declared! God for each of us finds a unique way to make His presence known. If we are observant soon we united would be! A fine poem declaring a great truth , dearest, Jenish!
Somadas Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 6:02 AM
Thank you Demotrios for that wonderful insight...
Lamoureux Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 12:20 AM
God does indeed dwell within each of us. That is quite extraordinary to ponder.
Somadas Avatar
March 1, 2020 at 1:07 AM
Thank you Richard for that profound comment..
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