The Kiss That Never Was Ver 2

Entwined in a lovers sweat
Passions sated, as a cool breeze 
Brings in the scent of the night
Tongues tasting of wine, fully satisfied

Eternal happiness, could this be?
Or should I run under gloomy tormented skies?
Hand in hand we traveled, across the fields of love
Into historié 

Sur le pont d’Avignon
We danced the night away
Round and round did we go
Our love fell into the Rhone

Devotion seemed a certainty
Love was passions muse
Broken, life fell in the abscess of my demise
All I truly desired, left sur le pont

The battle of Avignon left me defeated

As my memories fade, melancholy recalls to me

The kiss that never was

Meant to last
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 4:15 PM
this is more real with regards to its plot than the first one..the stanza with devotion is the one i like more .. :)
Vaso Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 5:36 PM
Thank you Olive, maybe I do a version 3? :)
Onclaud Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 9:42 AM
arthur, wonderful.. you give me something to ponder on, especially the beautifully nostalgic last lines..
Vaso Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 5:35 PM
Thanks Nette, much appreciated!
Smith Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 7:24 AM
Wonderful and passionate.. Sometime after a little wine our inhibitions are lowered but our senses are heightened. Well done my friend
Vaso Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 5:33 PM
Not to mention after a bottle or 2 of wine! :)
Manassian Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 2:18 AM
Beautiful, Arthur. Sometimes love has a way of fading almost imperceptibly....It rarely lasts....You wrote this so well, as always.......
Vaso Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 5:32 PM
Thanks Eileen, I hope you are enjoying your wee vacation!!!!
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