The Kiss

One last kiss before he leaves,
A token vowed as they part.
A luring note creating linger as
time will test an idle heart.

Two lost souls alone in a world,
Left with nothing but this taste.
A hazy zest that must prevail for
a broken seal knows waste.

An old adventure renews a smile,
A friend whose charms incite.
A clever plot that favors a yen but
fades wanting without a bite.

His loyal spirit finds way home,
She bears the fruit of her love.
A quaint bequest worth more than
gold and honored by grace above.
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Type: Rhyme
Submitted: 02/10/2018
Contest: Love Poem-Rhyme Only
Sponsor: Laura Loo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 2/24/2018 5:34:00 PM
Charming poem, Jesse. Congrats on your fine win.
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Jesse Day
Date: 3/5/2018 8:40:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 2/24/2018 2:05:00 PM
Simply lovely, Jess, congrats! Viv x
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Jesse Day
Date: 3/5/2018 8:40:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 2/23/2018 10:26:00 AM
great rhythm and rhyme, beautifully expressed thank you and congrats :) -luloo
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Jesse Day
Date: 3/5/2018 8:39:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 2/18/2018 7:36:00 PM
This was a wonderful read, Jesse. Good luck in the Innocent Mind contest. I don't think it got judged yet, right?
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Jesse Day
Date: 2/20/2018 8:17:00 AM
Thank you - still awaiting results ...
Date: 2/12/2018 9:17:00 PM
This is very beautiful. Profound love expressed, to the spirit beyond the flesh. I think this is more what God has in mind. And you said it perfectly.
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Jesse Day
Date: 2/20/2018 8:15:00 AM
Thank you!
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