The Kiss

The Kiss

Just one look
That was all it took
You said from me
You slowly came forward
Like a honey bee
And kissed me.....

But, I do not recall 
Giving you any kind of look at all...





I wrote this for my wonderful husband. He said I gave him "the look" on our first date. But, I really believe he just wanted to kiss me...and I let him.~Tammy~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/18/2021 6:41:00 AM
Ha ha, I’m sure he did.
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Date: 9/3/2012 7:00:00 AM
wonderful!
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Date: 8/14/2012 11:17:00 AM
What a lovely poem you have penned! It put a warm smile on my face. Thank you for sharing it with us ~hugs~ Aimee
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Date: 8/8/2012 7:21:00 PM
How funny and romantic!
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Date: 8/8/2012 1:27:00 PM
Nice poem. - JH
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Date: 8/6/2012 12:13:00 PM
Minimalist poetry with a punch...could apply to situations as well, where the kiss was not desired.
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Date: 7/30/2012 5:30:00 AM
All smiles...enjoyed this beautiful imagery of you and your husband's first encounter...love how you clarified the sequence of events at the bottom of the page even though your husband begs to differ..lol.
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Tammy Flanagan
Date: 7/31/2012 7:54:00 PM
Thank-you for the kind words.:) ~Tammy~
Date: 7/20/2012 8:17:00 AM
So sweet Tammy....love it. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 7/19/2012 7:16:00 AM
great pen, sweet content. :)
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Date: 7/19/2012 2:23:00 AM
Sweet
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Date: 7/18/2012 8:55:00 PM
lol... this is cute!
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