The Kiss

The Kiss Just one look That was all it took You said from me You slowly came forward Like a honey bee And kissed me..... But, I do not recall Giving you any kind of look at all... I wrote this for my wonderful husband. He said I gave him "the look" on our first date. But, I really believe he just wanted to kiss me...and I let him.~Tammy~

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/18/2021 6:41:00 AM

Ha ha, I’m sure he did.

Apoorva Patrikar

Date: 9/3/2012 7:00:00 AM

wonderful!

Aimee Garside

Date: 8/14/2012 11:17:00 AM

What a lovely poem you have penned! It put a warm smile on my face. Thank you for sharing it with us ~hugs~ Aimee

Danny Stinson

Date: 8/8/2012 7:21:00 PM

How funny and romantic!

Honestly J.T.

Date: 8/8/2012 1:27:00 PM

Nice poem. - JH

Robert Ludden

Date: 8/6/2012 12:13:00 PM

Minimalist poetry with a punch...could apply to situations as well, where the kiss was not desired.

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 7/30/2012 5:30:00 AM

All smiles...enjoyed this beautiful imagery of you and your husband's first encounter...love how you clarified the sequence of events at the bottom of the page even though your husband begs to differ..lol.

Tammy Bowers
Date: 7/31/2012 7:54:00 PM