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The Kiss

Two lovers’ one kiss Ecstasy divine Two lovers entwine And in rapture combine

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/10/2011 10:36:00 PM

Enrapturing!!

Billy Thekidster

Date: 12/7/2011 10:22:00 PM

How much of a coincidence is this? I recently wrote about my first kiss. Lovely poetry Ms Treetop, Lizzie.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/6/2011 7:44:00 PM

Four pleasing lines of bliss--The KISS! I really appreciate the shorter forms, Lizzie..short and sweet...get right to the kiss. lol. Are U slowing down at all? I sure hope so! ;) Luv, Gwendolen

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 12/6/2011 12:13:00 PM

* "TIS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL OF ALL GLORIOUS MOMENTS * THE DEEEPNESS AMID A BEAUTIFUL LOVES KISSSS * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL LIZZIE * YOUR LOVELY BEAUTY DESCRIBED ITS SWEET SPLENDOURS SOOO VERY PERFECTLY * FRAGRANT BEAUTY AMID THIS RAPTURES VERSE * ECSTASY * I SHALL FAVE THIS LOVELY PEARL * HAPPY HOLIDAYS * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *

Don Johnson

Date: 12/6/2011 1:59:00 AM

almost erotic mate, suggestive almost state, sublime...

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/5/2011 9:58:00 PM

What a poem of passion you wrote here! In rapture, very strong word, one of ecstasy! Love intertwines the two of them so blissfully! I love it!! Awesome Work!!