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The Key

Shapely and sturdy
with ridges 
to explore..

The texture is 
smooth
and lovingly 
adored..

A priceless gift 
which can 
only be bestowed..

By a thought 
a moment
of pure 
heavenly bliss..

So with this key
that unlocks
for only a rare few..

May you find
upon entering
this..

sacred..

glorious..

place..

Your key
fits 
perfectly..

In your
own
precious gate.

Copyright © Lynn Marie | Year Posted 2006

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Connie Marcum Wong Date: 10/2/2017 11:20:00 PM A wonderful thought provoking poem Lynn. To find bliss with our own key...lovely! : ) Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 2/23/2017 1:56:00 PM Very lovely and unique in thought, Lynn. I hope nobody cheats by using a skeleton key:) ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 9/21/2016 8:18:00 AM You are always so upbeat and positive in most of your poems, I think you may be my opposite, lol. A lovely poem Lynn. You brought a gentle sweet smile to my face. I'll make a copy of my key for you. I hope you're well. Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 8/31/2016 11:28:00 AM While entering in to a beautiful ridge through its gate way having nice feeling which is like a key opens the door of mind and gradually beautiful things are seen and can be realized how much beautiful it is. Good feeling itself is a key that paves further to realize more beauty in life. i smell a nice philosophy here that think beauty to feel beauty more ahead. A nice seven. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 8/29/2016 6:31:00 PM Hi Lynn, a well thought out poem with wonderful content. You have used the free verse form well in this write. You have used its scope really well. I find free verse can give you far more scope in your writing. The key is a beautiful journey you do take us on Lynn. Your words come from the heart and touch the heart so gently. I Love perusing your words and i look forward to seeing some new ones when you can write them. This is a definite seven and a fave. Love....Mike. XX Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/25/2016 8:10:00 PM I love the ending of this one. In your own precious gate. it's a very sweet and inspiring poem! Login to Reply Lynn Marie Date: 8/25/2016 9:06:00 PM your kindness and lovely visits are very much appreciated andrea..thank you :-) blessings, lynn

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/1/2012 11:33:00 AM I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you Lynn. Love and best wishes always, Carol Login to Reply