The Key

Shapely and sturdy with ridges to explore.. The texture is smooth and lovingly adored.. A priceless gift which can only be bestowed.. By a thought a moment of pure heavenly bliss.. So with this key that unlocks for only a rare few.. May you find upon entering this.. sacred.. glorious.. place.. Your key fits perfectly.. In your own precious gate.

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/2/2017 11:20:00 PM

A wonderful thought provoking poem Lynn. To find bliss with our own key...lovely! : )

Paul Callus

Date: 2/23/2017 1:56:00 PM

Very lovely and unique in thought, Lynn. I hope nobody cheats by using a skeleton key:) ~ Regards // paul

James Inman

Date: 9/21/2016 8:18:00 AM

You are always so upbeat and positive in most of your poems, I think you may be my opposite, lol. A lovely poem Lynn. You brought a gentle sweet smile to my face. I'll make a copy of my key for you. I hope you're well.

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/31/2016 11:28:00 AM

While entering in to a beautiful ridge through its gate way having nice feeling which is like a key opens the door of mind and gradually beautiful things are seen and can be realized how much beautiful it is. Good feeling itself is a key that paves further to realize more beauty in life. i smell a nice philosophy here that think beauty to feel beauty more ahead. A nice seven. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/29/2016 6:31:00 PM

Hi Lynn, a well thought out poem with wonderful content. You have used the free verse form well in this write. You have used its scope really well. I find free verse can give you far more scope in your writing. The key is a beautiful journey you do take us on Lynn. Your words come from the heart and touch the heart so gently. I Love perusing your words and i look forward to seeing some new ones when you can write them. This is a definite seven and a fave. Love....Mike. XX

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2016 8:10:00 PM

I love the ending of this one. In your own precious gate. it's a very sweet and inspiring poem!

Lynn Marie
Date: 8/25/2016 9:06:00 PM

your kindness and lovely visits are very much appreciated andrea..thank you :-) blessings, lynn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/1/2012 11:33:00 AM

I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you Lynn. Love and best wishes always, Carol