The Keets, Goldie and Blueboy, Oh My

There once was a family named Keets
         They spoke             in a series of tweets
     Goldie was                      yellow and slender, of course
        Blueboy                          was puffy and had no remorse
  Together,                               they’d swing or gaze in the mirror
  And watching                         them peck could not have been dearer
   Their house                              was a castle of plastic and wire
 That echoed                                  their chirps, an avian choir
 It always sat                                    perched on Grandmother’s table
 And that was                                     the start of this family fable
  You see, she                                      would often leave open their door
  They could fly                                      freely or even explore
      But one day,                                    not seeing the window ajar
     She sighed as                                    they both winged their way to a star
 Blueboy returned                                  but Goldie was free
     How Grandmother                            cried as she did decree
    I’ll get my girl back         , I’ll call      the police
     Thinking for certain, they’d   listen        at least
  When asked to provide her name and        address
               With no second thoughts, she        muttered her best
     She lived on Byrd Street and this was         no joke
              They did not believe her, had she        misspoke?
                      Sure lady! They said, no time      for a game!
             Grandmother and Blueboy were never the same

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Date: 6/2/2018 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations for being on the best poem list Mike. Happy Saturday :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 6/2/2018 1:15:00 PM
Thanks much Heidi! Congratulations to you as well as you are also xxoo
Date: 5/25/2018 2:52:00 PM
I have to tell you how much I adore this one Mike. I had 11 finalists, now I see why people shy from hosting Premier Contests, so hard at the end! I sorta knew this one was going to end up in my faves though, bird and shape lover that I am. xomo!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/25/2018 5:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen, that was so sweet of you to tell me, I’m so glad you liked it, that’s means more to me than a number xxoo happy Memorial Day !!!
Date: 5/9/2018 11:37:00 AM
Bravo, Mike! How creative,,, I have to try this shape. I love your poem and truly enjoyed reading.. hugs
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/9/2018 12:10:00 PM
Thanks, Eve, I appreciate your kind words xxoo
Date: 5/8/2018 1:35:00 PM
I'm applauding. Janice is right, creative is an understatement, this soars on wings of excellence. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/8/2018 2:19:00 PM
Thank you so much CayCay, Happy Tuesday xxoo
Date: 5/8/2018 9:36:00 AM
WOW! This is excellent, Mike. To say that it's creative is an understatement. My newest favorite! Janice
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/8/2018 11:39:00 AM
Aww, Thanks so much, Janice xxoo
Date: 5/7/2018 5:51:00 PM
Interesting mystery in this poem Mike. Creative and well done :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/7/2018 6:20:00 PM
Thank You Heidi xxoo
Date: 5/7/2018 4:59:00 PM
Terrific imagery along with your creativity, Mike!! Amazing rhyme.. Bravo!!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/7/2018 5:42:00 PM
Thank you so much Robertina xxoo
Date: 5/7/2018 4:31:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your story..awesome details..lovely design ..Goldie found a home somewhere perhaps! Best for a win, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/7/2018 4:34:00 PM
Thanks Vijay!!!
Date: 5/7/2018 4:26:00 PM
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:-) hugs jan xx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/7/2018 4:34:00 PM
Thanks Jan xxoo
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