The Keets, Goldie and Blueboy, Oh My

There once was a family named Keets
         They spoke             in a series of tweets
     Goldie was                      yellow and slender, of course
        Blueboy                          was puffy and had no remorse
  Together,                               they’d swing or gaze in the mirror
  And watching                         them peck could not have been dearer
   Their house                              was a castle of plastic and wire
 That echoed                                  their chirps, an avian choir
 It always sat                                    perched on Grandmother’s table
 And that was                                     the start of this family fable
  You see, she                                      would often leave open their door
  They could fly                                      freely or even explore
      But one day,                                    not seeing the window ajar
     She sighed as                                    they both winged their way to a star
 Blueboy returned                                  but Goldie was free
     How Grandmother                            cried as she did decree
    I’ll get my girl back         , I’ll call      the police
     Thinking for certain, they’d   listen        at least
  When asked to provide her name and        address
               With no second thoughts, she        muttered her best
     She lived on Byrd Street and this was         no joke
              They did not believe her, had she        misspoke?
                      Sure lady! They said, no time      for a game!
             Grandmother and Blueboy were never the same
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Sands Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Congratulations for being on the best poem list Mike. Happy Saturday :)
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June 2, 2018 at 1:15 PM
Thanks much Heidi! Congratulations to you as well as you are also xxoo
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May 25, 2018 at 2:52 PM
I have to tell you how much I adore this one Mike. I had 11 finalists, now I see why people shy from hosting Premier Contests, so hard at the end! I sorta knew this one was going to end up in my faves though, bird and shape lover that I am. xomo!
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May 25, 2018 at 5:58 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen, that was so sweet of you to tell me, I’m so glad you liked it, that’s means more to me than a number xxoo happy Memorial Day !!!
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May 9, 2018 at 11:37 AM
Bravo, Mike! How creative,,, I have to try this shape. I love your poem and truly enjoyed reading.. hugs
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May 9, 2018 at 12:10 PM
Thanks, Eve, I appreciate your kind words xxoo
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May 8, 2018 at 1:35 PM
I'm applauding. Janice is right, creative is an understatement, this soars on wings of excellence. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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May 8, 2018 at 2:19 PM
Thank you so much CayCay, Happy Tuesday xxoo
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May 8, 2018 at 9:36 AM
WOW! This is excellent, Mike. To say that it's creative is an understatement. My newest favorite! Janice
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May 8, 2018 at 11:39 AM
Aww, Thanks so much, Janice xxoo
Sands Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 5:51 PM
Interesting mystery in this poem Mike. Creative and well done :)
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May 7, 2018 at 6:20 PM
Thank You Heidi xxoo
B. Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 4:59 PM
Terrific imagery along with your creativity, Mike!! Amazing rhyme.. Bravo!!
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May 7, 2018 at 5:42 PM
Thank you so much Robertina xxoo
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May 7, 2018 at 4:31 PM
Enjoyed reading your story..awesome details..lovely design ..Goldie found a home somewhere perhaps! Best for a win, Mike.
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May 7, 2018 at 4:34 PM
Thanks Vijay!!!
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May 7, 2018 at 4:26 PM
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:-) hugs jan xx
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May 7, 2018 at 4:34 PM
Thanks Jan xxoo
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