The Just

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THE JUST

FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, PICTURE TAKEN BY ME, (c)

The just delights himself when on the path of light even if it is paved by grief and pain! (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 20 August 2016

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/20/2016 8:05:00 AM

- "Whoever increases his knowledge increases his pain." - Grief can not delete the colors of pleasure in life - (The eyes can smile, the mouth can laugh, but the sorrow of the heart can no see ) - A beautiful line dear friend - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/20/2016 8:23:00 AM

Very much so dear, Anne-Lise! Thank you for your constructive comments. Hugs!

Probir Gupta

Date: 8/20/2016 5:27:00 AM

How beautifully said ... very graceful ... A single line evoking many a time in many a space ... What a rich poetic line ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/20/2016 5:51:00 AM

Thank you my friend, Probir! It is such a delight to read comments like this!

Gary Bateman

Date: 8/20/2016 4:12:00 AM

Perfectly put Herr Professor!! Grief and Pain, alas are always part of our mutual human condition. Cheers and Best, Gary

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/20/2016 5:54:00 AM

Mein lieber freund, Gary! I am so happy to receive your visit and your appropriate comment! Thank you!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/20/2016 3:46:00 AM

Aha! I'm delighted:) grief and pain will never deter the just:) Lovely line:)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/20/2016 5:54:00 AM

Absolutely, my friend, Jo! The just will not be deterred! Thank you for your visit!