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The Joys of Spring

dainty daffodils
glorious golden trumpets
blackbird gathers twigs

Nature Haiku with Alliteration Poetry Contest

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01/19/22

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Arjun Jangid

January 31, 2022 at 5:06 PM

Daffodils And Blackbird are welcoming spring. Beautifully panned Jan.

Beata Agustin

January 24, 2022 at 9:01 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Tania Kitchin

January 24, 2022 at 12:55 PM

Jan, congratulations on your winning placement with your charming haiku with wonderful alliteration and imagery! hugs

Sam Kauffman

January 24, 2022 at 10:15 AM

Jan, congratulations. This haiku is such a bright moment in the middle of winter. So happy to see such a happy haiku on the winners list! Hugs :D

Christuraj Alex

January 24, 2022 at 9:22 AM

Great imagery. Congratulations!

Gershon Wolf

January 22, 2022 at 8:35 PM

Sweet one. So pretty!! Cheers, Gershon

Richard Colbert

January 20, 2022 at 2:48 PM

a pleasant read, Jan. very nice. Rich

Andrea Dietrich

January 20, 2022 at 1:05 PM

Fantastic alliteration, my friend!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 20, 2022 at 9:02 AM

- A lovely haiku, Jan - Yesterday I saw that the tulip bulbs were beginning to sprout ... today they are drowned in snow - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

January 20, 2022 at 11:01 AM

we have glorious spring like weather and have been tidying up in the garden, the bulbs are coming up and hopefully will be blooming in a few weeks xx

Joanna Daniel

January 20, 2022 at 6:03 AM

Brilliant one, Jan:) should be a winner:)

Jan Allison

January 20, 2022 at 7:13 AM

Thanks Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

January 20, 2022 at 1:01 AM

This is a beauty. You alliteration excels. Hugs.

Jan Allison

January 20, 2022 at 7:14 AM

Thanks Victor:-) hugs Jan xx

Valsa George

January 20, 2022 at 12:43 AM

A lovely alliterative haiku melding two beautiful scenes ! Daffodils and thrush .... two of my favorites !

Jan Allison

January 20, 2022 at 7:14 AM

Thanks Valsa I amended the final line as I had too much alliteration in the poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Mulu Magdalinos

January 19, 2022 at 11:22 PM

A lovely haiku!!

Jan Allison

January 20, 2022 at 7:17 AM

Thanks Mulu:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

January 19, 2022 at 6:50 PM

What a gorgeous haiku Jan! Perfect for the contest! I will wager this will be high to the top of the winner’s list. Blessings xxoo

Jan Allison

January 20, 2022 at 7:15 AM

Thanks so much Connie:-) hugs Jan xx

Mystic Rose Rose

January 19, 2022 at 5:53 PM

oh I can't wait to see a little of this again, nicely done Jan, ww all for you xo

Jan Allison

January 20, 2022 at 7:15 AM

Thanks Vie:-) hugs Jan xx

Bill Baker

January 19, 2022 at 2:14 PM

Good entry for the Haiku contest, Jan, good luck! Bill

Jan Allison

January 19, 2022 at 3:56 PM

thanks Bill:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

January 19, 2022 at 1:54 PM

delightfully done, jan! good luck in the contest...

Jan Allison

January 19, 2022 at 3:56 PM

thanks Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands

January 19, 2022 at 11:08 AM

Perfect Haiku Jan. Well done :)

Jan Allison

January 19, 2022 at 3:55 PM

thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx

L Milton Hankins

January 19, 2022 at 10:36 AM

Ah, this one warmed the cockles of my heart, Jan!

Jan Allison

January 19, 2022 at 3:55 PM

thanks Milton, so glad you are back with us xx:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

January 19, 2022 at 10:32 AM

One of the first signs of spring, can't come quick enough Jan. Tom

Jan Allison

January 19, 2022 at 3:55 PM

thanks Tom I love to see the spring flowers:-) hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh

January 19, 2022 at 10:12 AM

Spring is in the air Jan, and this contest is hotting up quite nicely, great entry and balance for this form, cheers David

Jan Allison

January 19, 2022 at 3:54 PM

thanks David:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

January 19, 2022 at 10:00 AM

Saint David Day isn't until March, but daffodils certainly cheer up a morning! Enjoyed! Aloha!

Jan Allison

January 19, 2022 at 3:54 PM

thanks Rico, a couple of yrs back we had daffodils flowering on Christmas day, thankfully spring is going to be at the correct time this year!:-) hugs Jan xx

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