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dainty daffodils glorious golden trumpets blackbird gathers twigs Nature Haiku with Alliteration Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin 5,7,5 Checked with HMS 01/19/22

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Date: 1/31/2022 5:06:00 PM
Daffodils And Blackbird are welcoming spring. Beautifully panned Jan.
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Date: 1/24/2022 9:01:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 1/24/2022 12:55:00 PM
Jan, congratulations on your winning placement with your charming haiku with wonderful alliteration and imagery! hugs
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Date: 1/24/2022 10:15:00 AM
Jan, congratulations. This haiku is such a bright moment in the middle of winter. So happy to see such a happy haiku on the winners list! Hugs :D
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Date: 1/24/2022 9:22:00 AM
Great imagery. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/24/2022 8:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! A spectacular poem! Chantelle hugs
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Date: 1/22/2022 8:35:00 PM
Sweet one. So pretty!! Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 1/20/2022 2:48:00 PM
a pleasant read, Jan. very nice. Rich
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Date: 1/20/2022 1:05:00 PM
Fantastic alliteration, my friend!!
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Date: 1/20/2022 9:02:00 AM
- A lovely haiku, Jan - Yesterday I saw that the tulip bulbs were beginning to sprout ... today they are drowned in snow - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/20/2022 11:01:00 AM
we have glorious spring like weather and have been tidying up in the garden, the bulbs are coming up and hopefully will be blooming in a few weeks xx
Date: 1/20/2022 6:03:00 AM
Brilliant one, Jan:) should be a winner:)
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Date: 1/20/2022 7:13:00 AM
Thanks Jo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/20/2022 1:01:00 AM
This is a beauty. You alliteration excels. Hugs.
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Date: 1/20/2022 7:14:00 AM
Thanks Victor:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/20/2022 12:43:00 AM
A lovely alliterative haiku melding two beautiful scenes ! Daffodils and thrush .... two of my favorites !
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Date: 1/20/2022 7:14:00 AM
Thanks Valsa I amended the final line as I had too much alliteration in the poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/19/2022 11:22:00 PM
A lovely haiku!!
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Date: 1/20/2022 7:17:00 AM
Thanks Mulu:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/19/2022 6:50:00 PM
What a gorgeous haiku Jan! Perfect for the contest! I will wager this will be high to the top of the winner’s list. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/20/2022 7:15:00 AM
Thanks so much Connie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/19/2022 5:53:00 PM
oh I can't wait to see a little of this again, nicely done Jan, ww all for you xo
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Date: 1/20/2022 7:15:00 AM
Thanks Vie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/19/2022 2:14:00 PM
Good entry for the Haiku contest, Jan, good luck! Bill
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Date: 1/19/2022 3:56:00 PM
thanks Bill:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/19/2022 1:54:00 PM
delightfully done, jan! good luck in the contest...
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Date: 1/19/2022 3:56:00 PM
thanks Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/19/2022 11:08:00 AM
Perfect Haiku Jan. Well done :)
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Date: 1/19/2022 3:55:00 PM
thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/19/2022 10:36:00 AM
Ah, this one warmed the cockles of my heart, Jan!
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Date: 1/19/2022 3:55:00 PM
thanks Milton, so glad you are back with us xx:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/19/2022 10:32:00 AM
One of the first signs of spring, can't come quick enough Jan. Tom
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Date: 1/19/2022 3:55:00 PM
thanks Tom I love to see the spring flowers:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/19/2022 10:12:00 AM
Spring is in the air Jan, and this contest is hotting up quite nicely, great entry and balance for this form, cheers David
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Date: 1/19/2022 3:54:00 PM
thanks David:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/19/2022 10:00:00 AM
Saint David Day isn't until March, but daffodils certainly cheer up a morning! Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Date: 1/19/2022 3:54:00 PM
thanks Rico, a couple of yrs back we had daffodils flowering on Christmas day, thankfully spring is going to be at the correct time this year!:-) hugs Jan xx