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The Joys of Spring

dainty daffodils
glorious golden trumpets
blackbird gathers twigs

Nature Haiku with Alliteration Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Tania Kitchin

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01/19/22

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2022

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Arjun Jangid Date: 1/31/2022 5:06:00 PM Daffodils And Blackbird are welcoming spring. Beautifully panned Jan. Login to Reply

Beata Agustin Date: 1/24/2022 9:01:00 PM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 1/24/2022 12:55:00 PM Jan, congratulations on your winning placement with your charming haiku with wonderful alliteration and imagery! hugs Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 1/24/2022 10:15:00 AM Jan, congratulations. This haiku is such a bright moment in the middle of winter. So happy to see such a happy haiku on the winners list! Hugs :D Login to Reply

Christuraj Alex Date: 1/24/2022 9:22:00 AM Great imagery. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/22/2022 8:35:00 PM Sweet one. So pretty!! Cheers, Gershon Login to Reply

Richard Colbert Date: 1/20/2022 2:48:00 PM a pleasant read, Jan. very nice. Rich Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/20/2022 1:05:00 PM Fantastic alliteration, my friend!! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/20/2022 9:02:00 AM - A lovely haiku, Jan - Yesterday I saw that the tulip bulbs were beginning to sprout ... today they are drowned in snow - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/20/2022 11:01:00 AM we have glorious spring like weather and have been tidying up in the garden, the bulbs are coming up and hopefully will be blooming in a few weeks xx

Joanna Daniel Date: 1/20/2022 6:03:00 AM Brilliant one, Jan:) should be a winner:) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/20/2022 7:13:00 AM Thanks Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/20/2022 1:01:00 AM This is a beauty. You alliteration excels. Hugs. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/20/2022 7:14:00 AM Thanks Victor:-) hugs Jan xx

Valsa George Date: 1/20/2022 12:43:00 AM A lovely alliterative haiku melding two beautiful scenes ! Daffodils and thrush .... two of my favorites ! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/20/2022 7:14:00 AM Thanks Valsa I amended the final line as I had too much alliteration in the poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Mulu Magdalinos Date: 1/19/2022 11:22:00 PM A lovely haiku!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/20/2022 7:17:00 AM Thanks Mulu:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 1/19/2022 6:50:00 PM What a gorgeous haiku Jan! Perfect for the contest! I will wager this will be high to the top of the winner’s list. Blessings xxoo Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/20/2022 7:15:00 AM Thanks so much Connie:-) hugs Jan xx

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 1/19/2022 5:53:00 PM oh I can't wait to see a little of this again, nicely done Jan, ww all for you xo Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/20/2022 7:15:00 AM Thanks Vie:-) hugs Jan xx

Bill Baker Date: 1/19/2022 2:14:00 PM Good entry for the Haiku contest, Jan, good luck! Bill Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/19/2022 3:56:00 PM thanks Bill:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer Date: 1/19/2022 1:54:00 PM delightfully done, jan! good luck in the contest... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/19/2022 3:56:00 PM thanks Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands Date: 1/19/2022 11:08:00 AM Perfect Haiku Jan. Well done :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/19/2022 3:55:00 PM thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx

L Milton Hankins Date: 1/19/2022 10:36:00 AM Ah, this one warmed the cockles of my heart, Jan! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/19/2022 3:55:00 PM thanks Milton, so glad you are back with us xx:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham Date: 1/19/2022 10:32:00 AM One of the first signs of spring, can't come quick enough Jan. Tom Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/19/2022 3:55:00 PM thanks Tom I love to see the spring flowers:-) hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh Date: 1/19/2022 10:12:00 AM Spring is in the air Jan, and this contest is hotting up quite nicely, great entry and balance for this form, cheers David Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/19/2022 3:54:00 PM thanks David:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta Date: 1/19/2022 10:00:00 AM Saint David Day isn't until March, but daffodils certainly cheer up a morning! Enjoyed! Aloha! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/19/2022 3:54:00 PM thanks Rico, a couple of yrs back we had daffodils flowering on Christmas day, thankfully spring is going to be at the correct time this year!:-) hugs Jan xx