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dainty daffodils glorious golden trumpets blackbird gathers twigs Nature Haiku with Alliteration Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin 5,7,5 Checked with HMS 01/19/22

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Arjun Jangid

Date: 1/31/2022 5:06:00 PM

Daffodils And Blackbird are welcoming spring. Beautifully panned Jan.

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/24/2022 9:01:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/24/2022 12:55:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your winning placement with your charming haiku with wonderful alliteration and imagery! hugs

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/24/2022 10:15:00 AM

Jan, congratulations. This haiku is such a bright moment in the middle of winter. So happy to see such a happy haiku on the winners list! Hugs :D

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/24/2022 9:22:00 AM

Great imagery. Congratulations!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/22/2022 8:35:00 PM

Sweet one. So pretty!! Cheers, Gershon

Richard Colbert

Date: 1/20/2022 2:48:00 PM

a pleasant read, Jan. very nice. Rich

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2022 1:05:00 PM

Fantastic alliteration, my friend!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/20/2022 9:02:00 AM

- A lovely haiku, Jan - Yesterday I saw that the tulip bulbs were beginning to sprout ... today they are drowned in snow - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/20/2022 11:01:00 AM

we have glorious spring like weather and have been tidying up in the garden, the bulbs are coming up and hopefully will be blooming in a few weeks xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/20/2022 6:03:00 AM

Brilliant one, Jan:) should be a winner:)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/20/2022 7:13:00 AM

Thanks Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/20/2022 1:01:00 AM

This is a beauty. You alliteration excels. Hugs.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/20/2022 7:14:00 AM

Thanks Victor:-) hugs Jan xx

Valsa George

Date: 1/20/2022 12:43:00 AM

A lovely alliterative haiku melding two beautiful scenes ! Daffodils and thrush .... two of my favorites !

Jan Allison
Date: 1/20/2022 7:14:00 AM

Thanks Valsa I amended the final line as I had too much alliteration in the poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 1/19/2022 11:22:00 PM

A lovely haiku!!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/20/2022 7:17:00 AM

Thanks Mulu:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/19/2022 6:50:00 PM

What a gorgeous haiku Jan! Perfect for the contest! I will wager this will be high to the top of the winner’s list. Blessings xxoo

Jan Allison
Date: 1/20/2022 7:15:00 AM

Thanks so much Connie:-) hugs Jan xx

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/19/2022 5:53:00 PM

oh I can't wait to see a little of this again, nicely done Jan, ww all for you xo

Jan Allison
Date: 1/20/2022 7:15:00 AM

Thanks Vie:-) hugs Jan xx

Bill Baker

Date: 1/19/2022 2:14:00 PM

Good entry for the Haiku contest, Jan, good luck! Bill

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2022 3:56:00 PM

thanks Bill:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/19/2022 1:54:00 PM

delightfully done, jan! good luck in the contest...

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2022 3:56:00 PM

thanks Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/19/2022 11:08:00 AM

Perfect Haiku Jan. Well done :)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2022 3:55:00 PM

thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx

L Milton Hankins

Date: 1/19/2022 10:36:00 AM

Ah, this one warmed the cockles of my heart, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2022 3:55:00 PM

thanks Milton, so glad you are back with us xx:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/19/2022 10:32:00 AM

One of the first signs of spring, can't come quick enough Jan. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2022 3:55:00 PM

thanks Tom I love to see the spring flowers:-) hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh

Date: 1/19/2022 10:12:00 AM

Spring is in the air Jan, and this contest is hotting up quite nicely, great entry and balance for this form, cheers David

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2022 3:54:00 PM

thanks David:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 1/19/2022 10:00:00 AM

Saint David Day isn't until March, but daffodils certainly cheer up a morning! Enjoyed! Aloha!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2022 3:54:00 PM

thanks Rico, a couple of yrs back we had daffodils flowering on Christmas day, thankfully spring is going to be at the correct time this year!:-) hugs Jan xx