The Journey Begins

The journey begins, with hope and wonder,
And years seem endless from curious eyes.
Time moves slow before death plows us under,
To reveal its nature and sanctifies.
Days become minutes as we grow older.
Speed of the journey increases with time
The weight of the journey we must shoulder
Decisions and obstacles we shall climb.
We'll never return from where we started,
Or measure the depth of our first stride.
Memories tell of where we departed.
The journey leaves evidence we can't hide.

Life is a gravel road all must walk on,
As we count the nights and await the dawn.


contest The Journey Begins
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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November 17, 2015 at 10:03 PM
Frederic, Congratulations, Have a nice day. SKAT
Scars Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 4:01 PM
Congrats on your win Frederic! -LU xxx *smiles*
Dietrich Avatar
November 11, 2015 at 12:28 AM
this is wonderful sonnet writing , as always. Hope it does well in the contest, my friend.
Artis Avatar
November 10, 2015 at 6:51 PM
Beautifully painted, dear Frederic! Good luck in the contest +7
Andresen Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 3:03 PM
- A wonderful sonnet, beautiful lines to the end - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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November 9, 2015 at 11:40 AM
Just lovely as usual...BG
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