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The Journey

birth, such joy; the journey, twisting, turning- life ! grief, choked pain: sorrow thick, with tears, with sighs- death ! _______________________________ March 2, 2019 Poetry/Lanterne/the journey Copyright Protected, ID 19-1119-545-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Light Up The Page sponsor, Joseph May Second Place

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Date: 3/10/2019 10:20:00 PM
A sincere congratulations on your win in Joseph's "Lanterne" contest, Constance - blessings and best wishes, and keep that ink flowing, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 3/11/2019 4:17:00 AM
Greg, thanks for visiting my poem and for the congratulations , appreciate ~
Date: 3/10/2019 8:37:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Heart. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/11/2019 4:17:00 AM
Eve, thanks for the congratulations and hugs ~
Date: 3/10/2019 6:36:00 PM
life certainly is a journey Constance, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/11/2019 4:18:00 AM
Jan, thanks for visiting and the congrats and hugs ~
Date: 3/9/2019 8:29:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem: The journey, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/9/2019 10:02:00 AM
Anne-lise, thanks for the congratulations ~
Date: 3/3/2019 10:10:00 PM
SO NICE. I admire.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/9/2019 10:01:00 AM
Anisha, thanks for the visit and comment~
Date: 3/3/2019 12:28:00 PM
Very effective, contrasting the difference between life and death, skillfully done-
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Constance La France
Date: 3/9/2019 10:00:00 AM
Michelle, thanks for visiting and for the compliment ~
Date: 3/2/2019 11:08:00 AM
Great lanterne... You said so much with so few words..
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Constance La France
Date: 3/2/2019 11:33:00 AM
Silent, thanks for visiting, it was hard to do actually, so happy you like it, my friend ~

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