The Journey

birth, such joy; the journey, twisting, turning- life ! grief, choked pain: sorrow thick, with tears, with sighs- death ! _______________________________ March 2, 2019 Poetry/Lanterne/the journey Copyright Protected, ID 19-1119-545-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Light Up The Page sponsor, Joseph May Second Place
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Barden Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 10:20 PM
A sincere congratulations on your win in Joseph's "Lanterne" contest, Constance - blessings and best wishes, and keep that ink flowing, my friend! :-) <3
La France Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 4:17 AM
Greg, thanks for visiting my poem and for the congratulations , appreciate ~
Roper Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 8:37 PM
Congratulations, Dear Heart. Hugs Eve ~`*
La France Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 4:17 AM
Eve, thanks for the congratulations and hugs ~
Allison Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 6:36 PM
life certainly is a journey Constance, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 4:18 AM
Jan, thanks for visiting and the congrats and hugs ~
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2019 at 8:29 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem: The journey, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
March 9, 2019 at 10:02 AM
Anne-lise, thanks for the congratulations ~
Dutta Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 10:10 PM
SO NICE. I admire.
La France Avatar
March 9, 2019 at 10:01 AM
Anisha, thanks for the visit and comment~
Faulkner Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 12:28 PM
Very effective, contrasting the difference between life and death, skillfully done-
La France Avatar
March 9, 2019 at 10:00 AM
Michelle, thanks for visiting and for the compliment ~
One Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 11:08 AM
Great lanterne... You said so much with so few words..
La France Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 11:33 AM
Silent, thanks for visiting, it was hard to do actually, so happy you like it, my friend ~
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