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The Jilted Spring

from rushing waters steal invading fishes' spritely steel, twixt heathery beetle's scar and fluttery, flapping jar the sentry hill now set drags ferment's peace to fret, while in the brave snail's eye comes forth a baneful cry from moorhen's craven beak warm blood the bird to seek, erect reminders, failing snow disappear in morning's glow, and from the corncrakes ring shouts forth the jilted spring

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/2/2015 10:23:00 AM
Wow, Peter, incredible and unique imagery...I feel winter's desperate hold. Congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/31/2015 5:44:00 PM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Peter Lewis Holmes
Date: 3/31/2015 9:08:00 PM
Thanks Sara!....Peter
Date: 3/29/2015 10:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Peter. Well deserved 7. Kim :)
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Date: 3/29/2015 8:45:00 AM
Peter, congratulations on your wonderful win with this beautiful poem, a perfect 7 . . .
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Date: 3/28/2015 9:54:00 PM
wow, your poem is most interestingly different from the mainstream on spring flowers. Stark imagery and amazing concept. Love that title jilted spring. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 3/28/2015 2:01:00 PM
nicely terse lament of winter's resistance to letting go. Congrats on a unique take and style on the theme.
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Date: 3/28/2015 12:27:00 PM
Great job and congrats :)
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Date: 3/28/2015 12:13:00 PM
such incredibly imagery Peter - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/22/2015 7:15:00 AM
Amazing write my friend. I read it 4 times and was still digesting its breadth! Adding this gem to my fav list and thanks for it... Stunning , simply stunning!
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