The jealous leper

There was a poor bloke once
inflicted with miserable leprosy
his story, the mind it stuns
but such was his jealousy!

One day some angels came to him
with mercy to heal his ailment
They inquired of his wish and whim
but were in for a shocking lament.!

The angels asked him as to whether
he wanted health restored, his disease healed
Replied the leper, 'he wanted neither
What he said hence, his jealousy revealed!

For he said, ''you needn't heal me, but instead
Inflict everyone else with my malady as well
let all of them lie loathed and deplored in bed,
as I've had to all these days like hell''!

The angels left astounded, simply returned to heaven
with neither healing him nor inflicting others
They still wonder from above the heavens seven
at how man envies his fellow brothers.

Ah, envy is a fire that consumes thee most,
Far better for humans if they coveted not
Why want ye, haunt ye another's fortune
like some covetous malevolent ghost?

Therefore why at all covet
You haven't right to it unless 
it was your right, or was snatched
A fit of jealousy might make you regret
and to hell you may be dispatched.!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Zuberi Avatar
January 11, 2026 at 7:49 AM
I find this to be a fascinating expedition into the irony of jealousy. Wonderful work!
Kamoonpuri Avatar
March 15, 2026 at 1:19 PM
Thanks so much for feedback,
Beaufort Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 12:34 PM
Zaynab, a story like this can teach us a lot. You're not criticizing anyone, but rather exposing the hurt and anger that can result when one is depressed or unhappy over time. It's a great lesson, and we and those who have been down for a long time will hopefully realize that the desire to inflict harm is simply a message that one is unhappy. We all have the opportunity to choose our response to hurt and anger. Many simply do not have the skill set to set their lives on the right path. As Jennifer says just below....a competent therapist of some kind might help.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
March 15, 2026 at 1:18 PM
Yeah this is just an oral tradition story which i turned into a poem. Not targeting anyone in particular. Thanks for comment,
Proxenos Avatar
December 4, 2025 at 10:53 AM
Hi Zay, ENVY is a disease, which is ugly, sad and dangerous. Your poem is interesting and well researched as well as being an alarm bell. Ugly for it discloses one nature, sad, that one cannot see the beauty in this world and dangerous because one could suffer the consequence of one's evil will. But if we come across such a person that is consumed with envy as it can be sensed, avoid seeing them ever again, say a prayer for them or refer them to a man of faith or a psychologist! Hugs Jen
Kamoonpuri Avatar
March 15, 2026 at 1:17 PM
Yeah my poem is just a story but there must be jealous people everywhere so this reflects on them. Warm thanks for feedback,
Hind Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 1:25 PM
Interesting tale, Zainab. A good lesson, too <3
Kamoonpuri Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 8:53 PM
Warm thanks for fine comment,
Rodgers Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 9:56 AM
Hello Zaynab, A great cautionary tale that was passed down to you. Yes, jealousy blinds us to mercy, consumes our spirit, and leaves us in self-made torment. A wonderful story and I am glad that you are back posting again. Autumn Blessings, Zaynab, Daniel
Kamoonpuri Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 8:53 PM
Hi Daniel well said and true, thanks soo much for great comment,
Rodrigues Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 6:00 AM
Wow! Yes, some want to stay miserable and long to have others inflicted as they. That is a sad way to live. Great write, Zyrool!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 8:43 AM
Sorry, I know that I also commented on Zyrool’s today. Thank you, Zaynab!
Kamoonpuri Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 8:30 AM
Very sad indeed, warm thanks for feedback, im zaynab not zyrool lol lol
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 10:53 AM
Hello S, Zaynab, I wonder why he was filled with jealousy. What was he jealous of? He wanted others to suffer like him. What was the reason for that? A very sad poem. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 10:55 AM
Hello s, Zaynah, to be jealous is not a good thing. It does not help the situation at all. Oh, yet not everyone is jealous. Hugs. /Darlene/
Kamoonpuri Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 6:35 AM
This is a tale i heard in oral tradition stories and i made it into a poem. A tale but reflects on some jealous humans who want everyone to be afflicted when they are.
Haque Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 8:53 AM
Wow, what an astonishing piece of literature! And what a fabulous life lesson! Nice work, kudos to you
Kamoonpuri Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 6:33 AM
Thankyou so much for wonderful feedback,
Buhagiar Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 5:53 AM
Jealousy is a terrible sin. Nothing good can come of it.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 6:33 AM
Indeed, thanks so much for feedback,
Jones Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 7:00 PM
The man is the perfect example of the phrase “misery loves company”. He learned nothing from his affliction and perhaps it is why he is still afflicted. Good job writing a unique and engaging poem with a meaningful story.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 9:13 PM
Warm thanks for your wonderful thoughts adding to this,
Scorpio Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 4:00 PM
Hmm, reminds me of a favorite saying. "The devil is in the details" said the forlorn. Is how much always worth weighing? I very much enjoyed your provocative writing! Best A.S.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 9:12 PM
Warm thanks for your super comment ,
Hawley Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 8:36 AM
What a horrible wish! The wish was not getting healed but making everyone else sick. Anyways good job.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 9:41 AM
Yeah u got it perfectly. Horrible wish indeed. Warm thanks for feedback,
Kendrick Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 7:15 AM
A really alluring one with a great moral at the end. Yes, jealousy and envy can eat away at a person until they are hateful and bitter. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Kamoonpuri Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 9:41 AM
Warm thankd for great apt comment,
Jabeen  Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 7:09 AM
Beautiful poem.The hidden wish,so beautifully described. Well done!! God bless you.
Kamoonpuri Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 9:40 AM
A bad wish yeah. Warm thanks for comment,
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