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The Jagger Swagger

Old Mick has the lips of a bragger And wiggles his hips with a swagger. He jumps, full of beans In black skinny jeans With hip-shaking destined to stagger! Old ladies enjoy the distraction Of seeing their idol in action. He keeps them at bay For, wrinkly and grey, They can't give him no satisfaction! 30.08.19 'Swagger poetry contest' sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Kim Merryman

Date: 3/31/2021 1:57:00 PM

Wendy, these are great limericks about Mick Jagger! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Wendy Watson
Date: 4/6/2021 3:45:00 AM

Thank you, Kim. I wish I had his stamina and waistline!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/7/2019 10:06:00 PM

Just love how you utilized that last line. Congrats on your win in the contest, Wendy! Best wishes, Gershon

Wendy Watson
Date: 3/30/2021 1:30:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon. The energy of the man!

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/7/2019 7:39:00 AM

Hi Wendy, I enjoyed both limericks about Mick Jagger. I must admit he most definitely has swagger. Congratulations on your your 2nd place win. Have a great weekend:-) Alexis

Wendy Watson
Date: 3/30/2021 1:30:00 PM

Thanks, Alexis. No wonder he remained so slim!

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/7/2019 7:26:00 AM

The ending wraps up your poem perfectly and the whole is perfect too. Congrats on your win Wendy.

Wendy Watson
Date: 3/30/2021 1:29:00 PM

Thank you Jeanne. I appreciate your time and comments.

Chris Green

Date: 8/30/2019 7:27:00 AM

I love how you ended this. Wishing you satisfaction in the contest

Wendy Watson
Date: 3/30/2021 1:28:00 PM

Thank you for taking the time to read and give feedback,Chris.