The Jaded Eye

Death is not death but a mask of great love
That protects us from pain in archived dust
Where vanity veils and desire dreams lust,
And the spirit's retreat is safe above.

Behind the mask like wings of woodland dove
A heart still beats, and footsteps break the crust
Of memory with shadows of her bust
Along the staircase of time and true love.

For love is eternal and cannot die,
Though a heart may pine itself bare to bones;
The soul that loves forever in the eye

Of God, a kindred spirit life enthrones.
The mask that fools the jaded mortal eye
Is but fickle flesh cradled on our bones.

ITALIAN (Sicillian) SONNET: abba abba cdc dcd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 5:11 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in the "Sonneteers" contest David. Love, Carol
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April 27, 2012 at 9:14 PM
So rich in metaphor that it shines. I think your sonnet is well layered and the last three lines are what garnished my high marks. Stellar write, congratulations. Hope you write a Modern Sonnet for our next co-judged contest, sometime near the end of summer, we are thinking. :) Cyndi
Guzzi Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 3:16 PM
Such uplifting thoughts are meant to be read over and over. So glad you are back writing for us, please do something for my new contest WOMAN..I know you can! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Williams Avatar
April 27, 2012 at 8:03 AM
David congrats on your win, excellent poem..David
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April 20, 2012 at 11:20 PM
David, Wonderful, always a pleasure to read your poetry. Have yourself a goodnight, PD ;-)
Guzzi Avatar
April 20, 2012 at 7:32 AM
Hi Dave..just me but I would prefer A caoital letter at the beginning of a sentence and a period at the end of the thought..omly. Thanks for the entry BIG hugs Light & Love
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April 20, 2012 at 7:25 AM
I would like to challenge you my friend.. After reading this poem the rhyme scheme reminds me of a favorite style of mine, The Monotetra!! I have just written one called "A Beach Lagoon"!! The instructions are at the top before the poem.. I would like to see your interpretation of that form!! I hope you do it!! If you do let me know so that I can read it!!..:JP]
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