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The Jaded Eye

Death is not death but a mask of great love That protects us from pain in archived dust Where vanity veils and desire dreams lust, And the spirit's retreat is safe above. Behind the mask like wings of woodland dove A heart still beats, and footsteps break the crust Of memory with shadows of her bust Along the staircase of time and true love. For love is eternal and cannot die, Though a heart may pine itself bare to bones; The soul that loves forever in the eye Of God, a kindred spirit life enthrones. The mask that fools the jaded mortal eye Is but fickle flesh cradled on our bones. ITALIAN (Sicillian) SONNET: abba abba cdc dcd

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/4/2012 5:11:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in the "Sonneteers" contest David. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/27/2012 9:14:00 PM
So rich in metaphor that it shines. I think your sonnet is well layered and the last three lines are what garnished my high marks. Stellar write, congratulations. Hope you write a Modern Sonnet for our next co-judged contest, sometime near the end of summer, we are thinking. :) Cyndi
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Date: 4/27/2012 3:16:00 PM
Such uplifting thoughts are meant to be read over and over. So glad you are back writing for us, please do something for my new contest WOMAN..I know you can! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/27/2012 8:03:00 AM
David congrats on your win, excellent poem..David
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Date: 4/20/2012 11:20:00 PM
David, Wonderful, always a pleasure to read your poetry. Have yourself a goodnight, PD ;-)
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Date: 4/20/2012 7:32:00 AM
Hi Dave..just me but I would prefer A caoital letter at the beginning of a sentence and a period at the end of the thought..omly. Thanks for the entry BIG hugs Light & Love
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Date: 4/20/2012 7:25:00 AM
I would like to challenge you my friend.. After reading this poem the rhyme scheme reminds me of a favorite style of mine, The Monotetra!! I have just written one called "A Beach Lagoon"!! The instructions are at the top before the poem.. I would like to see your interpretation of that form!! I hope you do it!! If you do let me know so that I can read it!!..:JP]
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